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Post by goldenmyst on Nov 15, 2023 12:43:10 GMT -6
amber of bourbon aged in charred oak barrel her heart
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Post by Castle Court Jester on Nov 18, 2023 18:47:43 GMT -6
This speaks to me of a beautiful heart that has gone through some rough times and some pain but has held onto its essence through it all. My take anyway Enjoyed
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Post by goldenmyst on Nov 18, 2023 19:22:08 GMT -6
Michael, my friend, that is exactly what I was communicating here. Thank you so much for applying your gifted perception to my poem. Love your look at it. John
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Post by AquarianM on Nov 22, 2023 23:19:05 GMT -6
I love bourbon, and it sounds like the perfect salve for an aching heart. A couple of fingers of amber reflection indeed. Well-writ.
Dan
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Post by goldenmyst on Nov 23, 2023 14:47:56 GMT -6
Thanks so much, Dan. Love that my poem worked for you in those ways. I mostly write dialogue prose now but every now and then I write poetry.
John
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