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Post by goldenmyst on Oct 18, 2023 18:17:55 GMT -6
The Home I Left
The cities passed in desolation as I wandered further from the past. My feet shuffled through autumn leaves in the park. My life had become a funeral procession. I had never known the sorrow which weighs the soul like a drunken stupor.
My sister Rose returned every night to haunt me. In my dreams she pleaded for mercy and my return. Yet I kept moving for in motion I felt was the key to freedom.
One night Rose approached me clothed in a virgin white dress. She held a flower to my face. I breathed the fragrance. She walked away leading me to the home I’d abandoned months ago. It was then I knew that the road to redemption was paved in tears Haunted by the birds of appetite that stalk the lonely hours like ravens in the night
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Post by Catlady2710 on Oct 19, 2023 11:46:55 GMT -6
A very meaningful poem.
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Post by goldenmyst on Oct 19, 2023 12:26:04 GMT -6
thanks Cat. This is one I think was clear in its meaning and it definitely got in depth responses and was clearly understood in the other places I posted it.
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Post by Castle Court Jester on Oct 21, 2023 0:46:12 GMT -6
What a deep and moving read John. It seems to me like she was your "guiding angel" wanting you to return despite the pain felt in loss and in doing so, returning, perhaps that helps aid in healing too and brings to loss back to a whole as well. It's a beautiful read, truly touches the soul.
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Post by goldenmyst on Oct 21, 2023 5:26:58 GMT -6
Deep gratitude my friend. My sister Rose and I were very close. Then I took the train to Denver and parted ways with my family for several months. I missed them terribly and was so glad to be reunited with Rose and my family upon my return to New Orleans.
John
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Post by AquarianM on Oct 29, 2023 3:55:20 GMT -6
John, that seems like a very powerful dream to me. However, I suspect that you needed that time away for reflection just as much as you needed to return.
I'm glad you shared it here with us.
Dan
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Post by goldenmyst on Oct 31, 2023 15:56:30 GMT -6
Thank you so much, Dan, my friend. Indeed the time spent far away from my home in New Orleans was a great way of coming of age for me. I was eighteen and just out of high school and on my own for the first time in my life at a young age.
John
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