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Post by Castle Court Jester on Sept 6, 2023 2:50:58 GMT -6
Treasure
I like looking at the moon
while we are talking on the phone
and you are looking at it too.
Things do not feel so alone.
In this way we are together
though we are very far apart.
Distance does not matter
to the spirit, to the heart.
You help me to be strong.
You give me hope when I am dying
and you will not accept my words
when I say I am done trying.
Sometimes you make me mad
but I know it is because you care
and that is what makes our friendship
one that is genuine to share.
Something would be wrong
if everything was always fine.
I only ask your honesty
as likewise you shall have mine.
I still remember when we met.
Every day since has been a pleasure
because you have been a part of every day
which makes every day a treasure.
--msl2023
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Post by Catlady2710 on Sept 6, 2023 11:13:30 GMT -6
What a beautiful ode to true friendship.
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Post by Castle Court Jester on Sept 6, 2023 22:49:09 GMT -6
ty
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Post by goldenmyst on Oct 14, 2023 0:45:25 GMT -6
Michael, one doesn't come upon a true companion every day. Kindred spirits might come into your life once in a lifetime. Your poem celebrates true friendship in an original and inspired poem. This is what poetry is all about. Seeing ancient themes in an original and fresh way as you have here.
John
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Post by Castle Court Jester on Oct 14, 2023 23:01:36 GMT -6
Ty so much
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