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Lucky Star Jul 22, 2023 2:36:57 GMT -6 goldenmyst likes this

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Post by Castle Court Jester on Jul 22, 2023 2:36:57 GMT -6

Lucky Star

This night so cold.

My breath I see.

I hurry to see you.

Soft crunching sound

of this week's snow.

The hill is now in view.

I have to break.

I have got to rest

then I will climb all the way

and when I do

I will send my wish

to you, my star, I pray.

Back on my way

I see you now.

I will soon be at the top!

Now here I am

seeing you shine

so close makes my heart stop!

It is true!

They said wish from up here,

you are closer to your star.

So close though still

so far away.

Your beauty is never far.

I cannot wait!

I wish my wish

and send it out to you!

It is happening!

Your colors change!

My wish is coming true!

What now I hear?

A sonic “BOOM!”

explodes throughout the night sky!

You change once more

then blow apart.

My lucky star, good-bye.

--msl2023

Catlady2710 Global Moderator Moderator Posts: 164,643	Lucky Star Jul 22, 2023 11:49:49 GMT -6 Castle Court Jester likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Catlady2710 on Jul 22, 2023 11:49:49 GMT -6 Interesting piece

Sugarmuser Super Star Posts: 1,439 Country: Australia	Lucky Star Jul 23, 2023 21:22:45 GMT -6 Castle Court Jester likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Sugarmuser on Jul 23, 2023 21:22:45 GMT -6 When you wish upon a star I guess nothing remains the same forever. I enjoyed the read Michael.
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Castle Court Jester Moderator Posts: 4,132 Country: United States of America	Lucky Star Jul 24, 2023 23:32:35 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Castle Court Jester on Jul 24, 2023 23:32:35 GMT -6 ty both so much

goldenmyst Guiding Light Star PC POET Posts: 20,308	Lucky Star Jul 25, 2023 20:52:04 GMT -6 Castle Court Jester likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by goldenmyst on Jul 25, 2023 20:52:04 GMT -6 Michael this is an explosive view into how the dreams of a life can blow apart leaving desolation. You put it into poetry that amazes me. You are the master of surprise endings, my friend. John
	"My muse changes clothes at the drop of a hat"

Castle Court Jester Moderator Posts: 4,132 Country: United States of America	Lucky Star Jul 26, 2023 0:54:20 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Castle Court Jester on Jul 26, 2023 0:54:20 GMT -6 Thank you all I actually wrote this one years ago when my depression issues were much worse shortly after my divorce

Catlady2710: Thanks Michael. They are calling them Argos for short, and this the second time they won the Grey Cup in the last 3 years. Nov 20, 2024 11:41:41 GMT -6

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Last night, our football team - The Toronto Argonauts (I didn't even know we had a football team to my shame) won the Grey Cup! Nov 18, 2024 11:11:38 GMT -6

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Post by Catlady2710 on Jul 22, 2023 11:49:49 GMT -6

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Post by Castle Court Jester on Jul 26, 2023 0:54:20 GMT -6

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