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Post by Castle Court Jester on Jul 22, 2023 2:18:09 GMT -6
Looking Into The Sun
Do not look into the sun
I have always heard them say.
But I looked into the sun.....
today.
Yes,
today I looked at you in the sun
and there was no pain.
There was no price for me to pay.
My sight is okay.
You appeared in the sun today
and asked that I look above.
Your voice as always full of love
when I saw you in the sun today.
And there was only you and I.
We, on some other plane of existence
watching life go passing by.
You said much the same as you had before.
Yes,
there was one other time I saw you in the sun.
In a dream you and I talked as we became one.
That time was special.
This time was too.
But this time spoke of good-bye's
that I never thought I would hear coming from you.
I see I was wrong.
There is a price to pay for looking into the sun.
--msl2023
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Post by Catlady2710 on Jul 22, 2023 11:52:02 GMT -6
Does the sun represent someone special who said a final good-bye? So sad.
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Post by Castle Court Jester on Jul 23, 2023 1:28:36 GMT -6
It's about my ex-wife
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Post by Catlady2710 on Jul 23, 2023 11:09:00 GMT -6
(((Hugs)))
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Post by Sugarmuser on Jul 23, 2023 21:18:05 GMT -6
I bet it was still worth looking into the sun, no matter the consequence. it is a little sad but it is also sweet.
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Post by Castle Court Jester on Jul 24, 2023 23:34:18 GMT -6
Ty both
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Post by goldenmyst on Jul 25, 2023 20:59:49 GMT -6
Damn, this is a strong tonic. You worked that metaphor into a blast of emotion that sears the soul. I felt this brother and the imagery was solid throughout.
John
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Post by Castle Court Jester on Jul 26, 2023 0:51:43 GMT -6
Thank you all so much
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