Rip It Out

Castle Court Jester
Moderator

Posts: 4,132
Country: United States of America
Member is Online

Rip It Out Jul 15, 2023 2:38:21 GMT -6 goldenmyst likes this

Quote

Post by Castle Court Jester on Jul 15, 2023 2:38:21 GMT -6

Rip It Out

I want to give you something of mine.

The whole thing, not just a part.

It has been broken for so long now.

Watch me rip out my own heart!

Don't you scream!

It doesn't matter!

I have no use for it anymore.

It wasn't just you, all of this handiwork.

There is no sense in keeping score.

Now here it comes!

That putrid organ!

Why don't you reach your hand inside?

Grab that damn heart and rip it through

like on the night that my spirit died!

Yes, you feel it don't you love?

And you are love in every form.

I'll never know your acquaintance.

Never shall you keep me warm.

To look at you (spit!)

Your twisted smile.

My heart feels cold within your hand.

Now rip it out love!

Rip it out!

At last you have made me understand.

--msl2023

Catlady2710 Global Moderator Moderator Posts: 164,643	Rip It Out Jul 15, 2023 12:18:46 GMT -6 Castle Court Jester likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Catlady2710 on Jul 15, 2023 12:18:46 GMT -6 This is worthy and very comparable to the writings of Edgar Allan Poe! Makes me think of his Tell Tale Heart.

Sugarmuser Super Star Posts: 1,439 Country: Australia	Rip It Out Jul 16, 2023 15:36:08 GMT -6 via mobile Castle Court Jester likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Sugarmuser on Jul 16, 2023 15:36:08 GMT -6 I feel the Melancholy tear through this piece. Great job
	SUGAR 💕

Castle Court Jester Moderator Posts: 4,132 Country: United States of America Member is Online	Rip It Out Jul 17, 2023 0:22:02 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Castle Court Jester on Jul 17, 2023 0:22:02 GMT -6 ty both

goldenmyst Guiding Light Star PC POET Posts: 20,308	Rip It Out Jul 25, 2023 20:34:49 GMT -6 Castle Court Jester likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by goldenmyst on Jul 25, 2023 20:34:49 GMT -6 Like a torn note from a symphony, this is so powerful it takes me deep into the heart of lost love like I have never seen or read. Powerful and raw my friend. John
	"My muse changes clothes at the drop of a hat"

Castle Court Jester Moderator Posts: 4,132 Country: United States of America Member is Online	Rip It Out Jul 26, 2023 0:58:02 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Castle Court Jester on Jul 26, 2023 0:58:02 GMT -6 Thank you all Like I've always said, I don't expect it to ever happen for me again but I still love to write a good dark poem here and there Thank you all so much

Catlady2710: Thanks Michael. They are calling them Argos for short, and this the second time they won the Grey Cup in the last 3 years. Nov 20, 2024 11:41:41 GMT -6

Catlady2710: Good morning

Last night, our football team - The Toronto Argonauts (I didn't even know we had a football team to my shame) won the Grey Cup! Nov 18, 2024 11:11:38 GMT -6

Catlady2710: Hi everyone - we got a message from Staples today saying that the laptop was ready for pick-up so we will go tomorrow morning to pick it up. Nov 11, 2024 11:44:57 GMT -6

Post by Castle Court Jester on Jul 15, 2023 2:38:21 GMT -6

Post by Catlady2710 on Jul 15, 2023 12:18:46 GMT -6

Post by Sugarmuser on Jul 16, 2023 15:36:08 GMT -6

Post by Castle Court Jester on Jul 17, 2023 0:22:02 GMT -6

Post by goldenmyst on Jul 25, 2023 20:34:49 GMT -6

Post by Castle Court Jester on Jul 26, 2023 0:58:02 GMT -6

Shoutbox