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Post by Castle Court Jester on Jul 15, 2023 2:21:37 GMT -6
Twisting and Turning
I am waiting.
Ever waiting.
Tell me, are you waiting too?
It seems as if we are always waiting.
Waiting without a clue.
I am falling through the air.
There is not much that does compare
to this free fall.
Do you feel it?
Or is just I?
I falling for you.
Twisting and turning.
Tearing
as I ride the wind
as I come down
to rest upon the cold,
hard ground.
And I would ask,
may I fall for you again?
It is all that I know.
All that I need to know.
All that I do.
Like a leaf twisting and turning.
Let it once more begin.
--msl2023
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Post by Catlady2710 on Jul 15, 2023 12:21:35 GMT -6
Like the 4 seasons, this love seems to come and go with the most agonizing hope. Very well expressed.
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Post by Sugarmuser on Jul 16, 2023 15:32:15 GMT -6
I don’t thing we have control over our emotions, they come out even if we do t want them to. Keep twisting and turning Michael. Nice work
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Post by Castle Court Jester on Jul 17, 2023 0:22:23 GMT -6
ty both
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Post by goldenmyst on Jul 25, 2023 20:38:50 GMT -6
The opening lines took me into the existentialist play "Waiting for Godot". Then your brilliant expose of the falling metaphor was like a dream lost among the stars of a flame of loss in a heart that cannot will not be extinguished. Strong as anything I have read.
John
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Post by Castle Court Jester on Jul 26, 2023 0:56:38 GMT -6
Thank you John, means a lot coming from you my friend
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