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Post by Castle Court Jester on Jul 12, 2023 4:18:26 GMT -6
Your Oblivion
Walking out to the nighttime sky.
A road of stars before my eyes
lying out for me to walk
being the only one there.
This trail laid out just for me.
The constellations majestically.
So many of them pulsing everywhere.
I wanted to swim in the Big Dipper.
I wanted to touch the nebula of Orion's belt.
Somewhere within stars just being born.
I wanted to walk deep into the night
with the comets assuring me that all is right.
Show me a black hole!
The largest one around!
Because I want to witness its vast power.
Just for a second will you make me cower
and then let me fall into you?
Into your oblivion.
--msl2023
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Post by Catlady2710 on Jul 12, 2023 12:16:55 GMT -6
Mystical!
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Post by Sugarmuser on Jul 12, 2023 15:39:47 GMT -6
I have created my own black holes from time to time, I escaped but the lifeless feeling of its negativity is overwhelmingly sad. Not matter how much is stirred up inside your mind, profound silence is worse.
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Post by Castle Court Jester on Jul 14, 2023 2:59:10 GMT -6
ty both
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Post by goldenmyst on Jul 25, 2023 20:32:19 GMT -6
Michael, you took the cosmic metaphor and soared with it! This is majestic yet oh so grounded in emotions. Loved what you created here.
John
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Post by Castle Court Jester on Jul 26, 2023 0:59:33 GMT -6
Sometimes you just want to disappear but yes Sugar, I agree with what you say. Glad you all enjoyed this
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