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Post by Castle Court Jester on Jun 15, 2023 2:23:06 GMT -6
Your Song
From the bottom of this well
I hear you sing.
I have never listened to your song
for how do I acquaint?
Deafened ears try to claim your tune
but remain hollow to each other.
How can I hear of your song
when focused on another?
I shall see this light you so praise
when one hundred thousand come.
It is by their very number
that damages become.
My eyes penetrate this foggy well
seeing through lids slit,
seeing high up the light.
The light that has finally come,
no longer forbidding.
And so from the bottom I rise
where I shall bask in new found home
where once an angry serpent
now such feeling has no right to roam.
The light pulls the final curtain.
The light now comes to claim the prize.
Through your song sight sees not double.
Sight does recognize.
--msl2023
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Post by Catlady2710 on Jun 15, 2023 11:23:07 GMT -6
A very inspiring piece, raising from dispair and anger to a good place and so eloquently penned with the song trying to guide you.
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Post by Sugarmuser on Jun 15, 2023 15:49:44 GMT -6
Very sweetly penned. Rise to listen and comprehend instead of ignoring the gifts. Beautiful Michael
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Post by Castle Court Jester on Jun 17, 2023 17:35:16 GMT -6
Thank you both
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Post by augustsky on Jun 17, 2023 19:54:57 GMT -6
I don't quite know how to take this, it's so very haunting to me, had to come back several times to read, could have many angles, or maybe I'm just in a weird mood. 😉 Very intruging Michael .
Sky
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Post by Castle Court Jester on Jun 20, 2023 22:46:23 GMT -6
Glad you all enjoyed
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Post by goldenmyst on Jul 11, 2023 21:00:10 GMT -6
Michael, this read like a spiritual resurrection of the soul. Loved reading this from you tonight. So hopeful and having faith in the future.
John
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Post by Castle Court Jester on Jul 12, 2023 1:56:09 GMT -6
Ty my friend Hope you enjoyed your trip
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