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Post by Castle Court Jester on May 25, 2023 0:37:12 GMT -6
The Prize
And now at last you have come to see it.
You have made it all this way.
It has taken years to get here.
You are anxious of this day.
It sits behind these curtains
from which it plays this crazy game
except each game has consequences
which never are the same.
You part the curtains to expose it.
You are taken back with shock.
Your own reflection is before you
yet your eyes they cannot lock.
It is you but it is not you
who will not look in your eyes.
Perhaps someday you will understand
the meaning of the prize.
--msl2023
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Post by Catlady2710 on May 25, 2023 14:19:46 GMT -6
There you go again, Michael, with another great write worthy of a Twilight Zone and the Night Gallery episode!
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Post by Sugarmuser on May 25, 2023 14:56:02 GMT -6
Nicely done, split into two energies that ignore each other. Great start to a horror story.
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Post by Castle Court Jester on May 25, 2023 23:52:23 GMT -6
Ty Glad you enjoyed
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Post by goldenmyst on Jun 3, 2023 20:45:32 GMT -6
Your signature style works its cinema noir magic here. Truly a wonder to behold the images you paint so exquisite in their darkness.
John
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Post by Castle Court Jester on Jun 5, 2023 22:42:42 GMT -6
ty my friend
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