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Post by goldenmyst on May 24, 2023 20:24:09 GMT -6

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Date palm oasis
In the shade of her dress
Her smile the sun
Whose kinky curls
Are solar flares
With fleur de lis eye shadow
In the red light of day
My heart pierced
By the throb of her lips
Whose upturned crescent
Is a silver scimitar
Of Arabian heat
Fabled in the noon
When her skirt falls
Over the golden treasures
Hidden in hourglass sands

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"My muse changes clothes at the drop of a hat"

Sugarmuser Super Star Posts: 1,439 Country: Australia	The Server May 24, 2023 20:45:32 GMT -6 via mobile goldenmyst likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Sugarmuser on May 24, 2023 20:45:32 GMT -6 She sounds beautiful. A lovely way to describe her. Nicely done John
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goldenmyst Guiding Light Star PC POET Posts: 20,308	The Server May 24, 2023 20:54:56 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by goldenmyst on May 24, 2023 20:54:56 GMT -6 Gracias mi amiga. So glad you liked my description of her. She always has a smile that lights up my day. John
	"My muse changes clothes at the drop of a hat"

Castle Court Jester Moderator Posts: 4,132 Country: United States of America	The Server May 25, 2023 0:01:35 GMT -6 goldenmyst likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Castle Court Jester on May 25, 2023 0:01:35 GMT -6 Very lovely. It's almost like "Disney" with you with the imagery but on an adult level lol Your imagery has always left me speechless John. Great write here, very beautiful indeed.

goldenmyst Guiding Light Star PC POET Posts: 20,308	The Server May 25, 2023 13:08:43 GMT -6 Castle Court Jester likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by goldenmyst on May 25, 2023 13:08:43 GMT -6 Love how you see my imagery, my friend. And knowing it leaves you speechless really makes my day. Thank you so much for appreciating her beauty that I put into words. John
	"My muse changes clothes at the drop of a hat"

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