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Post by Catlady2710 on May 20, 2023 17:32:42 GMT -6
The sun drops low leaving its reflection with a sigh
While dusky dark clouds stand at ease in a rosy sky
Looking like dark islands in a misty pink sea
The beauty of dusk a picture for all to see
Night closes in but beauty in memory does lie
Written August 20, 2011
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Post by goldenmyst on May 20, 2023 18:54:50 GMT -6
Love this. That last line really was beautiful and poignant. Read so beautifully.
John
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Post by Castle Court Jester on May 21, 2023 0:21:59 GMT -6
Love the word-painting my friend and the message within So easy to see!
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Post by Catlady2710 on May 21, 2023 13:06:29 GMT -6
Thanks John and Michael. One evening hubby and I, while on vacation, were driving along at dusk when I chanced to look up at the sky and see this. I had to write something down about it right away, and this poem was the result. The sky looked beautiful that evening - one of the most beautiful sunsets I have ever seen.
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Post by Sugarmuser on May 21, 2023 16:31:09 GMT -6
Beautiful words to paint dusk.
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Post by Catlady2710 on May 22, 2023 10:49:41 GMT -6
Thanks Sugar
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