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Post by Catlady2710 on May 20, 2023 17:30:40 GMT -6
A broken heart has me undone
Feelings destroyed and on the run
Pain shoots all through the heart
Hide my tears, not to start
As if these aching pains were none
Where is the healing that I need
Is it only thought and not deed
The long years pass me by
Eyes not able to cry
False strength always my sorrow`s seed
And then one day my sorrows fade
I find a new world has been made
Sorrow does still reside
But buried deep inside
False strength now becomes truly made
Written March 31, 2013
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Post by goldenmyst on May 20, 2023 18:53:23 GMT -6
Love the outcome here my friend. You create a tragic mood and then it dissipates into hope.
John
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Post by Castle Court Jester on May 21, 2023 0:20:55 GMT -6
Love it I think I'm kind of somewhere in the middle of this myself still but on the positive side more. There is certainly always light ahead to get us through the dark times, tis true. And yes, as you say, that pain is always there, marked the heart and soul, never truly goes away but becomes something more and more faded into the recesses and manageable. Good stuff
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Post by Catlady2710 on May 21, 2023 13:10:05 GMT -6
Thanks John and Michael
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Post by Sugarmuser on May 21, 2023 16:29:51 GMT -6
Bury the pain, I can relate. At a very vulnerable time in my life, Neil was aggressive to me, I still have that buried down inside of me and it comes up every now and again, I’m sure Neil has it regurgitate from time to time. The past never leaves us but we can move on. I guess you could call it a false strength, we look strong but the weakness resides within.
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Post by Catlady2710 on May 22, 2023 10:55:15 GMT -6
Thanks Sugar False strength does turn to true strength in time.
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