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Post by Catlady2710 on May 20, 2023 17:27:57 GMT -6
Tis the dead of night
There's no one in sight
A lonely one
Now is done
Never more in the light
Written May 26, 2010
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Post by goldenmyst on May 20, 2023 18:51:51 GMT -6
You write your sorrow so lyrically my friend.
John
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Post by Castle Court Jester on May 21, 2023 0:17:38 GMT -6
Can relate to this so well HUGS
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Post by Catlady2710 on May 21, 2023 13:13:53 GMT -6
Thanks John and Michael. This poem is meant to depict suicide. The lonely one can be any one of us.
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Post by Sugarmuser on May 21, 2023 16:08:11 GMT -6
I felt this. I know in the retirement village where Neil’s mum is they call each other in the morning so that someone will know if they have passed in the night. Many don’t have this luxury. Having had suicidal thoughts myself I can relate. Nice short on point write Cat.
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Post by Catlady2710 on May 22, 2023 11:06:33 GMT -6
Thanks Sugar. I think we all have suicidal thoughts at some point (or points) in our life.
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Post by augustsky on May 23, 2023 8:29:56 GMT -6
Packs a powerful punch, yet it's subtlety stands out here.
Well done..
Sky
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Post by Catlady2710 on May 23, 2023 11:25:11 GMT -6
Thanks so much Sky  |
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See you all more tomorrow. Happy Friday/weekend everyone 
