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Post by goldenmyst on May 6, 2023 16:37:22 GMT -6
Evening Primroses
She still remembers the night the moon rose over Esplanade Avenue with its light penetrating her soul deeper than the sun on a hot summer’s day.
She stands at the ivy gate to heaven looking up at the ghostly trees bearded in Spanish moss. Love creeps like ivy through the garden of her heart.
The promise of entwinement knots in her breast. Luna’s ray sneaks into the keyhole to the door of her soul behind which secret love hides.
His ring finger is a moonbeam that touches the rosebud of her chin until she blossoms into an evening primrose for whom the cool shadows of a fragile peace are her umbrella when fire rains at noon
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Post by Catlady2710 on May 6, 2023 17:00:04 GMT -6
Lovely
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Post by goldenmyst on May 6, 2023 17:13:24 GMT -6
Thanks.
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Post by augustsky on May 6, 2023 20:58:58 GMT -6
I enjoy the way this sounds & feels as it is read, lovely & luscious
Sky
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Post by goldenmyst on May 6, 2023 21:54:37 GMT -6
Deep gratitude to you Sky for really getting into this poem and appreciating the feel of it. Coming from someone with your poetic gift it really means the world to me.
John
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Post by Sugarmuser on May 7, 2023 15:13:51 GMT -6
This flowed beautifully, that end resounds, stays with you. Lovely wrote John
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Post by goldenmyst on May 7, 2023 16:21:17 GMT -6
Deep thanks to you Sugar my dear friend. I am moved by your words. Your comment here stays with me and enlivens my day.
John
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Post by Castle Court Jester on May 7, 2023 23:24:45 GMT -6
Most beautiful writing John Eternally beautiful as is she.
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Post by goldenmyst on May 7, 2023 23:36:55 GMT -6
Thank you from my heart Michael, my friend. Indeed she lives forever in my heart.
John
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