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Post by goldenmyst on Apr 17, 2023 16:03:12 GMT -6
Madhouse Kiss
Madhouse Mon Cheri Off the hip cackle “This is where rich folks go crazy” Staff shocked By her brassy voodoo spell
First trembling bird peck On Creole lips designed For madhouse paradise A touch of Hatter’s petal blues Hinted in her hazel eyes Torn from the Virgin ligaments Of an Achille’s dream In my fragmented mind
A late Bar Mitzvah She succored me In penciled lip balm That sketched my heart In pastel remedies for solitude
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Post by Sugarmuser on Apr 17, 2023 18:07:08 GMT -6
Sounds like a strong woman to me, lovely ending
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Post by goldenmyst on Apr 17, 2023 18:28:00 GMT -6
She was the queen of my nights in that place. My first kiss ever was with her. She was strong and kind all in one.
John
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Post by Castle Court Jester on Apr 18, 2023 0:21:00 GMT -6
Sometimes it's a lotta fun to go all out KRAZY Love the "tones" in your words John, they come out well. Can really hear the atmosphere of the place Even seem to smell a cigar
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Post by goldenmyst on Apr 18, 2023 12:09:55 GMT -6
Love that you could feel the tones, hear the atmosphere, and even smell the place my friend. Truly gives me a sense of having captured the place in words. Very glad to hear from you Michael. Really cool impression of this you left.
My first kiss, depicted here, was in a mental hospital. The staff there discouraged even prohibited physical contact between patients but let this one go.
John
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