Post by Sugarmuser on Apr 16, 2023 19:08:43 GMT -6
Twilight ocean whispers (rewrite) This was first written in 2006, I am looking over my old writes and editing them. It's nice to still have them online, stored away for a rainy day. The old computer I stored them on is long gone, lucky I did post them in Poetic constellations. They may not be works of art but they are mine and I remember most of them.
A high tide reaches out to
a wounded individual.
Lapping sea lips curl
towards a sandy retreat
illuminating a calming oasis.
Night’s dream pool
of silken ocean tips
ripple as my secret whispers
sweep delicately over
to sooth each jagged perception.
The shimmering surface
spreads all turbulence
out wide enough so that
a clear view is achievable.
What's left is a harmonious
wave of energy, that spills over
to silence an anxious voice
with reason.
A high tide reaches out to
a wounded individual.
Lapping sea lips curl
towards a sandy retreat
illuminating a calming oasis.
Night’s dream pool
of silken ocean tips
ripple as my secret whispers
sweep delicately over
to sooth each jagged perception.
The shimmering surface
spreads all turbulence
out wide enough so that
a clear view is achievable.
What's left is a harmonious
wave of energy, that spills over
to silence an anxious voice
with reason.
Love it. Can't say it any better than what John does above.
