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Post by goldenmyst on Apr 13, 2023 19:32:55 GMT -6
Tibetan Homesteaders
She dips her pail in the source
Where water from melted snow
Flows by our yurt
Into a cloud mirror lake
Where our Dharma dreams
Are light poured like lemongrass tea
From the porcelain cup of sky
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Post by Sugarmuser on Apr 13, 2023 20:33:13 GMT -6
Beautiful imagery, you make the ordinary seem extraordinary
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Post by goldenmyst on Apr 13, 2023 21:25:29 GMT -6
Sugar thank you so very much! Today I felt a deep peace suffuse my mind. So I was sitting in the coffee shop patio when I wrote this. So glad you enjoyed my poetic view of the daily lives of a Tibetan couple.
John
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Post by Castle Court Jester on Apr 15, 2023 22:35:53 GMT -6
Lovely imagery as always John and I agree very much with what Sugar says above. I have always found your imagery to be breathtaking. You seem to somehow show imagery to the reader through your words on a different level than then norm. Enjoyed
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Post by goldenmyst on Apr 16, 2023 14:46:54 GMT -6
Much gratitude Michael, my friend. Indeed my metaphors often leap the bounds of the norm. I am most thankful for your appreciation of my imagery.
John
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