This Night

Brian
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This Night Jan 10, 2023 6:29:40 GMT -6 Castle Court Jester likes this

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Post by Brian on Jan 10, 2023 6:29:40 GMT -6

Touch me with your subtle kiss,
Mere brushing of enticing lips,
Show the love light in your eyes,
Touch me with your subtle kiss,
Your subtle kiss,

Mere brushing of enticing lips,
Can take us to the rainbow's end,
Endless dance of hearts entwined,
Mere brushing of enticing lips,
Enticing lips,

Finger tips caressing sweet,
Warming frosted prints,
Whilst sending spine shivers,
Finger tips caressing sweet,
Caressing sweet,

Share comfort with me this night,
Banish yesterday's hauntings,
wrapped safely in lover's arms,
Share comfort with me this night,
This night,

Your subtle kiss,
Enticing lips,
Caressing sweet,
This night.

Brian Paul Sullivan 2023

Catlady2710 Global Moderator Global Moderator Posts: 164,674	This Night Jan 10, 2023 11:18:49 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Catlady2710 on Jan 10, 2023 11:18:49 GMT -6 This is so romantic Brian, and I love how your repeated the last words at the end of every verse, and then making a verse of their own at the end

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This Night Jan 10, 2023 16:06:13 GMT -6

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Post by Kerri on Jan 10, 2023 16:06:13 GMT -6

Lovely work.
Enjoyed the form.

Especially liked:

"Share comfort with me this night,
Banish yesterday's hauntings"

Brings to mind the difficult things in life
that everyone has to deal with,
Yet, the speaker finds comfort in this love.

Much enjoyed, Brian.

Brian Guiding Light Star Moderator - Writer Extraordinaire Posts: 93,796	This Night Jan 12, 2023 1:39:51 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Brian on Jan 12, 2023 1:39:51 GMT -6 Thank you Cat and Kerri.

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This Night Jan 15, 2023 13:46:24 GMT -6 Brian likes this

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Post by goldenmyst on Jan 15, 2023 13:46:24 GMT -6

Brian this held a deeply sentimental and nostalgic feeling for me of my long-lost wife. Your words took me on a memory journey into the heart of her and my past where magic unfolded as years paraded by. Truly a wondrous emotional path of words.

John

"My muse changes clothes at the drop of a hat"

Brian Guiding Light Star Moderator - Writer Extraordinaire Posts: 93,796	This Night Jan 18, 2023 5:58:14 GMT -6 goldenmyst likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Brian on Jan 18, 2023 5:58:14 GMT -6 Thank you Johh, it's meaningful when a written work touches some one so.

Castle Court Jester Moderator Posts: 4,132 Country: United States of America	This Night Mar 18, 2023 2:35:40 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Castle Court Jester on Mar 18, 2023 2:35:40 GMT -6 Very lovely writing Brian I enjoyed this immensely and there is just something so right with that special kiss from that special someone that can just make everything a-ok

Brian Guiding Light Star Moderator - Writer Extraordinaire Posts: 93,796	This Night Mar 18, 2023 10:23:08 GMT -6 Castle Court Jester likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Brian on Mar 18, 2023 10:23:08 GMT -6 Thank you good sir.

Sugarmuser Super Star Posts: 1,439 Country: Australia	This Night Mar 28, 2023 14:07:37 GMT -6 via mobile Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Sugarmuser on Mar 28, 2023 14:07:37 GMT -6 Lovely drift here, nice form. It’s nice to read you again Sharon
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Brian Guiding Light Star Moderator - Writer Extraordinaire Posts: 93,796	This Night Apr 18, 2023 21:20:19 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Brian on Apr 18, 2023 21:20:19 GMT -6 Ty Sharon, lovelly to see you again

augustsky Guiding Light Star PC POET Forever Poeming~ Posts: 13,572 Country: US	This Night Apr 24, 2023 16:25:16 GMT -6 via mobile Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by augustsky on Apr 24, 2023 16:25:16 GMT -6 Loved this beauty, the sentiment, & the form. Good to read you again Brian, It's been awhile. Sky
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Post by Brian on Jan 10, 2023 6:29:40 GMT -6

Post by Catlady2710 on Jan 10, 2023 11:18:49 GMT -6

Post by Kerri on Jan 10, 2023 16:06:13 GMT -6

Post by Brian on Jan 12, 2023 1:39:51 GMT -6

Post by goldenmyst on Jan 15, 2023 13:46:24 GMT -6

Post by Brian on Jan 18, 2023 5:58:14 GMT -6

Post by Castle Court Jester on Mar 18, 2023 2:35:40 GMT -6

Post by Brian on Mar 18, 2023 10:23:08 GMT -6

Post by Sugarmuser on Mar 28, 2023 14:07:37 GMT -6

Post by Brian on Apr 18, 2023 21:20:19 GMT -6

Post by augustsky on Apr 24, 2023 16:25:16 GMT -6

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