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Post by Deleted on Sept 8, 2022 1:19:01 GMT -6
Left
Left to watch the day's color
turning black and white.
Left to watch the day
combine to be gray.
Left to hear the wind whistle
blowing through old bones.
Left to hear old songs,
sing along.
Left to write the last note,
the words spark and aflame.
Left to write with cold hand,
love understand.
Left to walk a night street,
footfalls echo around,
lunatic laughter,
a bloody ground.
Left to be in the zone.
Air tugs at the skin.
Left to watch,
left to hear
all over again.
--msl2022
how I feel sometimes--oldie
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Post by goldenmyst on Sept 8, 2022 15:42:32 GMT -6
Oh man, I can understand this! This is how I felt a lot of the time at one time. My poetry was deeply sad at that time. But even in that darkness, there was a shine. Much like yours here. This poem is darkly exquisite and beautiful. Loved this my friend.
John
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Sept 13, 2022 1:14:05 GMT -6
Post by Deleted on Sept 13, 2022 1:14:05 GMT -6
ty
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Post by Catlady2710 on Sept 13, 2022 12:15:29 GMT -6
So very sad.
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Post by QueenFoxy on Sept 13, 2022 19:15:10 GMT -6
Looking for the good part. Oh....I found it. When the light shines upon it, all is not over. You get to do it again.
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Sept 13, 2022 23:32:11 GMT -6
Post by Deleted on Sept 13, 2022 23:32:11 GMT -6
HUGS ALL
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Post by QueenFoxy on Sept 14, 2022 20:36:36 GMT -6
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Post by Sugarmuser on Apr 11, 2023 19:09:26 GMT -6
Sometimes life seems to be one long loop from one day to the next, it’s the little things that make it all worth while. I think you already notice the little things Michael.
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Apr 11, 2023 23:55:18 GMT -6
Post by Castle Court Jester on Apr 11, 2023 23:55:18 GMT -6
ty all sorry, thought I had "liked" responses on these threads before, apologies
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