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Post by Catlady2710 on Aug 18, 2021 10:17:29 GMT -6
There I was all alone. Sitting at the computer when the dreaded mosquito whine started. I first heard it by my left ear and tried to flick it away. Silence. Then back that dreadful whine came, tensing my body with dread. I tried to see where it was, but at first could not locate it. And then, there it was, right in front of my eyes, mocking me with its whine. I tried it grab it, but it laughed its whine as it easily eluded my grasp. Time and time again, I tried to grasp it or slap at it, slapping myself instead. Desperation was setting in. Panic, even. And then an enlightening thought occurred to me. But would it work? One could but try. Slowly I rose from my chair, listening for its mocking whine. There, there it was. I took a few steps toward the sliding door, and waitied again to hear if it followed. Upon hearing it again, I took a few more steps, and continued in this fashion until I reached the sliding door. I stood to make sure I could hear if the dreadful creature was still there. Then slowly I raised my hand and slid the door open. Slowly I stepped out onto the deck, waiting. There, I heard it. It had followed me out. I quickly moved back into the loft, slamming the door shut. But did it follow me back in? I took my seat at the computer and waited. Nothing. Good, my plan had worked and the blood sucking creature was locked outside. He will have to look for a meal elsewhere.
True story!
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Post by goldenmyst on Aug 18, 2021 13:18:02 GMT -6
Cat, this is suspenseful and playful all in one. I loved the strategy you used in the end. Never have I read a story as developed and well-written on the subject of mosquitos. This took me into your experience with action-packed fun.
John
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Post by Catlady2710 on Aug 18, 2021 13:53:25 GMT -6
LOL - Thanks John. This happened to me last night and the words just started coming to me within a few minutes of me sitting down after leaving that bloodsucker out on the deck. I thought that I just had to write this down as the words were flowing in my mind. There was no rewrite or anything. It is given exacly as the words came to my mind at the time. When I was a kid I could scare all the other kids on camp-outs or sleep-overs when it came to scary story time. This was just like then. The words forming in my mind as I typed.
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Post by oldarmybear on Aug 18, 2021 17:15:34 GMT -6
I hate those little blood suckers.
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Post by QueenFoxy on Aug 18, 2021 17:51:45 GMT -6
Yes, Bear!! And who doesn't? There is nothing you can't turn into great prose.
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Post by AquarianM on Oct 9, 2021 20:38:16 GMT -6
Cat, I love it! You defeated the evil little whiner!
Dan
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Post by QueenFoxy on Oct 10, 2021 9:56:08 GMT -6
Yay!!! Hey there, Dan. Welcome home.
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Post by Catlady2710 on Oct 10, 2021 11:35:01 GMT -6
LOL Dan, I am glad you love it and, yes, I did defeat that little sucker Glad to have you back
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Post by Brian on Oct 21, 2021 3:13:58 GMT -6
LOL Cat, good riddance!
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Post by Catlady2710 on Oct 21, 2021 11:05:45 GMT -6
LOL Brian, that's how I felt too when I got it out the door - good riddance.
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Post by augustsky on Oct 30, 2021 18:04:36 GMT -6
Cat LOL, You outsmarted the little devil Glad they're buzzing & biting are gone with the season.
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Post by Catlady2710 on Oct 31, 2021 12:10:26 GMT -6
Thanks Sky, I am glad that those pests are gone for now too
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Post by Catlady2710 on Oct 31, 2021 12:14:51 GMT -6
I hate those little blood suckers. So do I. Thanks for the read
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Post by poetinpink on Nov 8, 2021 9:53:42 GMT -6
~ Hello Cat ~ What a fun bit of prose! Those lil' devils can be quite annoying & you've penned it with perfection my friend A delightful read today ~ Hope all is well with you & yours Huggerz Alana
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Post by Catlady2710 on Nov 8, 2021 10:40:50 GMT -6
~ Hello Cat ~ What a fun bit of prose! Those lil' devils can be quite annoying & you've penned it with perfection my friend A delightful read today ~ Hope all is well with you & yours Huggerz Alana Thanks Alana Glad you enjoyed it. It happened and then I came back to the computer. Almost immediately the words started flowing in my mind and I thought I had better write it down while it was still fresh in my mind. I had it all finished within 10 minutes of showing that little bloodsucker outside All is well with me and I hope all is well with you too
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Post by Sugarmuser on Jun 6, 2023 15:09:40 GMT -6
Hahaha, I can relate. Nice prose
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Post by Catlady2710 on Jun 6, 2023 17:41:48 GMT -6
Glad you enjoyed Sugar
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Post by Castle Court Jester on Jun 7, 2023 1:06:24 GMT -6
Excellent writing my friend You won the battle! Those little jerks carry a lot of disease with them. I don't mind killing them, even with my being Wiccan. They are a nuisance to say the least. I like to let my cat Tyra go after them if they get inside the house. She's pretty good at getting them too! She's quite the hunter! She does our taxes as well...wait..wtf?
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Post by Catlady2710 on Jun 7, 2023 12:12:14 GMT -6
Glady you enjoyed the read Michael My cats go after the bugs too, but alas, they are not good at doing my taxes
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