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Post by Catlady2710 on Mar 6, 2021 10:51:19 GMT -6
There is nothing left, she thought
As a tear ran down her cheek
A tear through strife clearly bought
One more rung below the reek
Eyes blurred as she held the knife
And then she stood resolute
Nothing more to be gained from life
The knife used to end pain's root
Morning found her in the cold
One of many homeless souls
Frozen body stark and bold
Her ignominious goals
Written by Cat February 7, 2014
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Post by QueenFoxy on Mar 6, 2021 15:48:09 GMT -6
Very sad and dark.
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Post by Catlady2710 on Mar 6, 2021 17:04:28 GMT -6
Thanks Foxy.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 30, 2021 10:34:37 GMT -6
Oh wow! This is heart wrenching
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Post by Catlady2710 on Mar 30, 2021 12:18:34 GMT -6
Thanks Michael. Glad it touched your heart.
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Post by dpg3 on Dec 4, 2021 20:16:24 GMT -6
Wow powerful and poignant!!
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Post by Catlady2710 on Dec 4, 2021 20:19:01 GMT -6
Thanks so much dpg3
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Post by Sugarmuser on Apr 1, 2023 3:50:38 GMT -6
Dark mood here, nice
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Post by Catlady2710 on Apr 1, 2023 10:46:04 GMT -6
Thanks Sugar
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Post by Castle Court Jester on Apr 1, 2023 23:11:14 GMT -6
awesome to read again, ty Sugar
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Post by Catlady2710 on Apr 2, 2023 10:50:50 GMT -6
Thank you Michael
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Post by goldenmyst on Apr 4, 2023 19:36:35 GMT -6
Steely in its power and darkly lit. Fine writing.
John
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Post by Catlady2710 on Apr 5, 2023 12:05:15 GMT -6
Thanks John
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