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Post by simpledip on Feb 16, 2021 20:53:52 GMT -6
Every song known in our lives will crescendo in our ears
notes converging in one sweet melody
of the joy and pain that brought us here
beckoned us to this moment in time
and will still pull us closer together, entwining us
merging...blending...melting our souls into a solitary entity
with implosions of joy from deep within.
And it will occur in the wisp of breath
between the syllables of our single utterance
I love you
- Dip
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Post by Catlady2710 on Feb 17, 2021 11:36:31 GMT -6
Such an eloquent love poem with much feeling.
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Post by QueenFoxy on Feb 17, 2021 16:57:54 GMT -6
Delightfully beautiful, Dip. I really love it.
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Post by simpledip on Feb 17, 2021 20:52:35 GMT -6
Bows deeply to My Friends for your love and care. I am indebted to you . - Dip
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Post by QueenFoxy on Feb 18, 2021 11:31:57 GMT -6
And I bow to you, my dear friend. You are easy to love.
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Post by goldenmyst on Feb 20, 2021 20:14:14 GMT -6
Dip, your poem is medicine for the melancholy. How could one not feel the joy of life from your words?
Bow deeply, John
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Post by supernova on Feb 20, 2021 21:05:37 GMT -6
This just says it all...wow. I am just blown away at the simplicity yet eloquence of this write. It is the perfect balance of what the heart wants, and what the soul says. Yes, I very much enjoyed indeed!!!
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Post by simpledip on Feb 21, 2021 7:02:02 GMT -6
Dip, your poem is medicine for the melancholy. How could one not feel the joy of life from your words? Bow deeply, John John, Your appreciation means a lot to me. Bows deeply. - Dip
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Post by simpledip on Feb 21, 2021 7:05:26 GMT -6
This just says it all...wow. I am just blown away at the simplicity yet eloquence of this write. It is the perfect balance of what the heart wants, and what the soul says. Yes, I very much enjoyed indeed!!! Thank you are two words not enough to express my gratitude for your encouraging words. I am glad that you enjoyed the sentiments in the poem. Bows deeply. - Dip
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