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Post by Deleted on Aug 22, 2020 2:15:49 GMT -6
Undead Heart
You stole my heart and left me dead inside.
You took my heart while laughing all the while
and now my days are grey.
Everything I see is black and white.
Life has no color for me anymore.
There is no warmth.
I am so cold.
I walk.
I live
without heart.
You stole my heart.
I am dead inside.
My blood runs cold.
I was still young but now look so old.
My skin is cracked.
My hair now white and falling out.
I show signs of decay.
You stole my heart.
You plunged your hand inside my chest
and wrapped it around my heart.
You ripped it out while laughing all the while.
Now I walk in search of you.
I only know it is what I have to do.
Perhaps so I may really die
I must find my heart,
find you and rip out your own
while laughing all the while.
--msl2020
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Post by Catlady2710 on Aug 22, 2020 9:50:58 GMT -6
Chills running up and down my spine!
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Post by QueenFoxy on Aug 22, 2020 23:38:52 GMT -6
WOW Michael. Lots of emotion displayed, both hurt and bitterness. Great writing.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 23, 2020 1:26:04 GMT -6
ty both
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Post by lostineternity99 on Sept 1, 2020 9:52:11 GMT -6
I like the bloody resolve at the end! Great dark writing, Mike
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Post by poetinpink on Sept 20, 2020 16:49:28 GMT -6
~Mic~ This one gave me goosebumps ~ Especially the ending....You're to NICE to rip out anyones heart! lol Enjoyed reading as I always do Huggerz Peep
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Post by supernova on Feb 3, 2021 21:10:04 GMT -6
I love the ending as well. This is SO my kinda read:) enjoyed your darkness!
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Post by Deleted on Mar 30, 2021 10:33:02 GMT -6
ty all
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Post by Sugarmuser on Apr 1, 2023 3:58:41 GMT -6
Ouch
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Post by Castle Court Jester on Apr 1, 2023 23:12:39 GMT -6
Ty Sugar and all again. Ty for kicking it back Sugar
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