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Post by goldenmyst on Jul 22, 2020 10:14:30 GMT -6
Music Class
Deep in the cloisters of terracotta belles effloresce with beaus among rows of wooden desks where coeds have sat for a century while breathing sighs of summer love. Their poetry is the blue sky under which gardens blossom in sonnets of sunshine heaped in bales of gold.
The young ladies chatter like Chickadees with gentlemen in a college-lyceum where Bach can’t compete with green grass and blue skies. So we follow the sun onto the campus green where lasses are peonies whose windblown fragrance is a kiss for lads while I sit in a Buddha pose with the heart of a child.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 23, 2020 1:48:00 GMT -6
Well this is certainly a music class I would like to be attending. Your imagery is phenomenal here. I like the way you interweave everything together bringing it to a whole as a classroom of nature in the entirety. Enjoyed
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Post by goldenmyst on Jul 23, 2020 3:58:31 GMT -6
Much gratitude Michael my friend.,Your review is poetic itself. Yes the classroom is nature itself around which the poem is woven. How wonderful to be read an understood with such crystal clarity and by a poet of your talent. I thank you my friend.
John
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Post by QueenFoxy on Jul 23, 2020 22:07:16 GMT -6
Totally delightful.
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Post by goldenmyst on Jul 24, 2020 7:57:43 GMT -6
Gracias mi amiga! I thank you from the heart my friend, Foxy.
XoXoXo John
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Post by Catlady2710 on Jul 24, 2020 9:57:40 GMT -6
Great imagery!
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Post by goldenmyst on Jul 24, 2020 18:09:16 GMT -6
Thanks, Cat! Glad you liked it. John
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Post by simpledip on Aug 11, 2020 23:48:37 GMT -6
So we follow the sun onto the campus green where lasses are peonies whose windblown fragrance is a kiss for lads while I sit in a Buddha pose with the heart of a child.
WOW!!! Bows deeply to a poet
I respect most.
- Dip
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Post by QueenFoxy on Aug 12, 2020 8:58:46 GMT -6
Good morning, Dip. Wishing you a safe and happy day.
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Post by goldenmyst on Aug 13, 2020 15:00:45 GMT -6
Dip a most hearty thanks to you for your fabulous words on my poem. Thank you from the heart my friend.
John
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Post by QueenFoxy on Aug 17, 2020 12:06:53 GMT -6
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Post by poetinpink on Aug 21, 2020 13:48:28 GMT -6
~John~ Such magical metaphors! I always get lost in the beauty of your words dear friend You are a master wordsmith for sure!!! This is so lovely!!! You bring it all together wonderfully Loved it muchers!!! Huggerz Alana
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Post by goldenmyst on Aug 21, 2020 15:55:14 GMT -6
Alana, you work your magic with words that feel like smiles of loving gentleness. Very glad you enjoyed this poem. It brings joy to my heart. Your expression are sunshine and rainbows.
Big Hugs, John
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Post by AquarianM on Aug 22, 2020 1:21:29 GMT -6
Sounds like a wonderful class indeed, John.
Dan
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Post by goldenmyst on Aug 22, 2020 7:29:20 GMT -6
Glad you enjoyed Dan my friend. Indeed classes like this don't come around every day. Great to see you here. John
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