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Post by Deleted on Jul 14, 2020 2:35:53 GMT -6
Time
It is all about time.
It is about being on time.
About making time.
We all wonder about it.
“What time is it?”
We have plenty of time while at the same time
we are losing time.
Take time to smell the flowers.
There is always going to be too much time
and/or not enough time.
But maybe, just maybe THIS time we can get it right
because THIS time could also be the LAST time.
Time to get busy living or get busy dying.
Only time will tell.
“tick tock.....tick tock”
If only we could turn back time.
Well, there is always daylight savings time.
At least we have that.
Time to stop wasting time!
But also time to stop being in such a hurry all the time too.
Take your time.
It is time for taking time to just.....be.
Sometime you will look back at that time
and wish you had that time back
or that you could do that time over again and do it differently.
It happens every time.
“tick tock.....tick tock”
“Rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrring!”
Time's up.
--msl2020
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Jul 14, 2020 8:58:01 GMT -6
Post by Catlady2710 on Jul 14, 2020 8:58:01 GMT -6
Most intriguing poem Michael!
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Post by poetinpink on Jul 14, 2020 20:55:35 GMT -6
~Mic~ I love this!!!!! Soooo much truth in your words A masterpiece in TIME Huggerz Peep
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Post by Deleted on Jul 23, 2020 1:48:36 GMT -6
Thank you both
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Post by QueenFoxy on Jul 23, 2020 22:01:51 GMT -6
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Post by Deleted on Jul 24, 2020 3:13:42 GMT -6
Ty
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Post by simpledip on Aug 11, 2020 23:52:22 GMT -6
Michael, I quote Rumi ..... "You've no idea how hard I've looked for a gift to bring You. Nothing seemed right. What's the point of bringing gold to the gold mine, or water to the Ocean.
Everything I came up with was like taking spices to the Orient. It's no good giving my heart and my soul because you already have these.
So- I've brought you a mirror.
Look at yourself and remember me.
~Rumi"
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Post by lostineternity99 on Aug 19, 2020 16:07:53 GMT -6
Time passed quickly while reading your cleverly serious poem, Mike.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 22, 2020 1:24:56 GMT -6
ty all
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Post by AquarianM on Aug 24, 2020 0:35:53 GMT -6
Love the ending in particular. I've always felt we're all prisoners of time.
Dan
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Post by goldenmyst on Aug 26, 2020 9:03:56 GMT -6
You take time and put it into human terms. How we spend it. Like Emersion said, "As if we could kill time without injuring eternity." That last line was a blockbuster. Really powerful. The perfect ending to this perfect and timely poem.
John
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