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Post by poetinpink on May 21, 2020 16:04:09 GMT -6
T hrough evenings mist an ample moon H angs like an ornate chandelier its E ffulgence softly bathing the waters edge
M oonbeams dance upon frothy waves as O palscent spindrifts haphazardly airbrush O nto the achromatic canvas of Mother N atures gentle slumbering
C ool winds waft across the rock strewn shore A s trees sashay by the light of the moon L ulling the nightscape with a soothing L uminescence which envelopes the S enses and whispers to the soul
© Poet In Pink
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Post by lostineternity99 on May 22, 2020 5:42:29 GMT -6
Wow Alana,
This is an Acrostic masterpiece!
Your imagery is vividly wonderful with sublimely flowing verses and ... the music, divinely mesmerizing! *applauds*
(((huggs)))
Ricky
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Post by Catlady2710 on May 22, 2020 13:41:45 GMT -6
Beautiful - both the poem and the music. So artfully executed
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Post by poetinpink on May 22, 2020 19:10:17 GMT -6
Wow Alana,
This is an Acrostic masterpiece!
Your imagery is vividly wonderful with sublimely flowing verses and ... the music, divinely mesmerizing! *applauds*
(((huggs)))
Ricky ~Ricky~ Your wonderful words warm my heart dear friend I'm blushing at all those compliments So happy you enjoyed & Thank you Huggerz Alana
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Post by poetinpink on May 22, 2020 19:11:41 GMT -6
Beautiful - both the poem and the music. So artfully executed ~Cat~ Thank you so much for reading and for your sweet comments So appreciated my friend Huggerz Alana
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Post by QueenFoxy on May 24, 2020 12:26:47 GMT -6
Very nice.
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Post by poetinpink on May 31, 2020 23:48:43 GMT -6
Thank you so much Foxy Huggerz Alana
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Post by Deleted on Jun 23, 2020 2:00:49 GMT -6
Beautiful combination you've pieced together for us to enjoy Peep HUGS
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Post by goldenmyst on Jun 23, 2020 23:01:49 GMT -6
Brilliantly wonderful imagery coupled with language that dances like a happy jig as the words go by. Your acrostic was genius, my darling friend. With each of your poems, I feel the rainbow of your smile. Your expression is brought into these words with irrepressible happiness.
Xo John
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Post by poetinpink on Jul 14, 2020 20:37:13 GMT -6
Beautiful combination you've pieced together for us to enjoy Peep HUGS ~Mic~ Thank you for poppin' in for a read Always appreciate your kind words Huggerz Peep
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Post by poetinpink on Jul 14, 2020 20:39:15 GMT -6
Brilliantly wonderful imagery coupled with language that dances like a happy jig as the words go by. Your acrostic was genius, my darling friend. With each of your poems, I feel the rainbow of your smile. Your expression is brought into these words with irrepressible happiness. Xo John ~ John ~ Thank you my friend for your wonderful compliments You always uplift my spirit with your support of my writing Huggerz Alana
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Post by AquarianM on Aug 23, 2020 1:23:50 GMT -6
I actually had a moment much like you describe in this poem, Alana. I was standing on a hotel balcony on the island of Maui in 2006, watching the full Moon shine it's soft light down on the beach, palms, and ocean. It was mystical. Beautiful work here, took me back to a lovely place.
Dan
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Post by poetinpink on Sept 18, 2020 20:07:54 GMT -6
I actually had a moment much like you describe in this poem, Alana. I was standing on a hotel balcony on the island of Maui in 2006, watching the full Moon shine it's soft light down on the beach, palms, and ocean. It was mystical. Beautiful work here, took me back to a lovely place. Dan ~Dan~ So happy to hear it brought back a cherished memory. Thank you for reading Alana
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Post by goldenmyst on Oct 13, 2020 6:57:16 GMT -6
Alana, this was a brilliant Acrostic that turned into even greater art. Sublimely inspired my friend. Gorgeous.
John
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