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Post by augustsky on Apr 18, 2020 14:56:27 GMT -6
Down Lost Dog Lane~
Into the woods down lost-dog-lane the ideal place to walk and reflect, I let the fog take my hand, lose myself in a gray shroud of long ago.
I could feel him probing.. my imagination, and I let him pet my wonder, With a smile he licked the fingertips of my naivete, then sopped the loving of this woman's wiles, gravy..to his bread, innocence his dessert, and I let him. Dark eyes hypnotize, things always become murky, but we are still Better for the Knowing, even for the fleeting kiss, and the warmed honey words.
Taken blind to the land of Nod, just to the left of his trove of dreams, thoughts to reincarnate whenever he wants, a twilight taste of sweet recall, to stir the pot of passion that bubbles with could-have-been.
I walk alone through these haunted Woods while a poem meanders up ahead, leaves are but scatterings of vague obscenities, an old lovers whisper, a message tangled in the mist.. stoned into the past down lost-dog-lane..
©Augustsky
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Post by Catlady2710 on Apr 18, 2020 16:49:45 GMT -6
Very poignant and beautifully expressed.
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Post by lostineternity99 on Apr 19, 2020 5:35:34 GMT -6
Such remarkable imagery in your instant classic poem, Sky!
A wonderfully poignant gem, so emotionally dynamic *applauds*
(((hugs)))
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Post by QueenFoxy on Apr 21, 2020 22:30:39 GMT -6
This is very beautiful and soooo emotionally charged.
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Post by augustsky on May 1, 2020 21:11:54 GMT -6
Thank you Cat, (((Rick))), & Foxy, hope you are all doing well..
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Post by QueenFoxy on May 18, 2020 1:50:37 GMT -6
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Post by poetinpink on Jun 5, 2020 12:56:30 GMT -6
~Sky~ I absolutely love each magical metaphor throughout This was beautiful ~ So enjoyed the read Hope all is well with you & yours dear friend Huggerz Alana
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Post by Deleted on Jun 23, 2020 1:59:08 GMT -6
Wow! I could even see the fog! Wickedly good stuff! You gotta be careful walking along lost-dog-lane. It's such a convenient little shortcut to hit Mickey D's too
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Post by goldenmyst on Jun 23, 2020 23:05:18 GMT -6
Hauntingly beautiful and filled with sweet nostalgia. Your walk down memory lane is told in that impressionist style which is your signature. You softly lead me down the path to where dreams come alive.
Xo John
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