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Post by Deleted on Nov 27, 2019 2:59:28 GMT -6
On Moving On
In my dreams I have heard a voice,
this voice, it always seems to say,
"Come out and watch the sunrise
one more time before it goes away."
I have been holding this within me,
tucked somewhere deep inside my mind
but this morning when I heard that call
I could not leave it behind.
And so I came to a decision.
That I would watch till the months end.
Just a feeling, I do not know myself.
Sometimes we just do not comprehend.
I will watch the lovely sunrise
as I have always tried to do.
There is no comparison when letting go
and allowing it to wash over you.
The experience is always rich!
The imagery is like none other!
I will sit and watch the sunrise
and then move on to find another.
Things in life do not remain the same
and that does not mean it is goodbye.
We all have something that is special
if even we are unsure why.
--msl2019
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Post by lostineternity99 on Nov 27, 2019 4:54:46 GMT -6
A beautifully written, touching and profound poem Mike.
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Post by Catlady2710 on Nov 27, 2019 11:24:09 GMT -6
So very touching
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Post by QueenFoxy on Nov 27, 2019 13:20:13 GMT -6
So beautiful and touching, Michael.
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Post by AquarianM on Nov 28, 2019 2:34:28 GMT -6
Sunsets are something that tend to haunt me; beautiful as anything we'll ever see, yet the end of another of our finite days. I wonder sometimes if the Universe remembers us after we're gone, and those who knew or knew of us are gone. Great write, Michael.
Dan
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Post by goldenmyst on Dec 2, 2019 21:11:02 GMT -6
Michael, this speaks to me of attachment and the undying human need to seek love once the old love has passed for whatever reason. Truly a sweeping poem with the sunset metaphor used with superb effect.
John
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Post by poetinpink on Dec 14, 2019 14:30:13 GMT -6
~Mic~ A touching write dear friend I feel your words within each line Here is to moving on.... Huggerz Peep
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Post by augustsky on Dec 31, 2019 13:40:07 GMT -6
Michael, I Like the metaphor here, & also the Rhyme! Happy New Year! Sky~
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Post by Deleted on Jan 2, 2020 0:47:31 GMT -6
Ty everyone! Way late I know....been dealing with the usual health stuff and was taking some time for myself. Appreciate you all
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