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Post by AquarianM on Oct 23, 2019 0:34:31 GMT -6
The Originals...
The people you grew up with, Scattered like Autumn leaves from the same tree, Some from the very same branch, Other from across the tree.
No matter how far the wind blows you away from the tree, In a quantum universe, You are still entangled.
The memory of the branches that bound you, Of Springtime and budding, Washed in same rains, Of the rustling winds of Summer nights, The shared glow of fireflies and stars, And Autumn's cool frost and bluster.
No matter how we crumble and mulch and scatter, You are the originals, And I remember.
AquarianM
By: Daniel A. Stafford © 10/22/2019
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Post by Deleted on Oct 23, 2019 1:23:47 GMT -6
And this is a great "original" done by you
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Post by lostineternity99 on Oct 23, 2019 3:28:38 GMT -6
These originals do always bring fond memories, Dan ... really nice nostalgic writing.
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Post by AquarianM on Oct 23, 2019 6:51:44 GMT -6
Michael and Rick, thank you both.
Dan
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Post by QueenFoxy on Oct 23, 2019 15:47:22 GMT -6
And it is beautiful, Dan, all those familiar leaves with all the same memories are still all tied to the same origin as you.
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Post by augustsky on Oct 23, 2019 19:46:29 GMT -6
Love your metaphor here Dan, Bless their 'Original' hearts! Wonderful read.. Sky~
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Post by AquarianM on Oct 24, 2019 1:08:00 GMT -6
QF, thank you, and love the graphic!
Dan
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Post by AquarianM on Oct 24, 2019 1:08:45 GMT -6
Sky, thank you. Bless their hearts indeed!
Dam
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Post by Catlady2710 on Oct 25, 2019 10:19:58 GMT -6
Love the human analogy from humans to tree leaves
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Post by Brian on Oct 25, 2019 19:14:39 GMT -6
It tugs at the strands of memory that fade so fast behind us. Beautifully penned Dan.
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Post by AquarianM on Oct 25, 2019 23:41:51 GMT -6
Love the human analogy from humans to tree leaves Cat, thank you. I think Autumn is an reminder that we and everything we know has a season. Dan
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Post by AquarianM on Oct 25, 2019 23:43:09 GMT -6
It tugs at the strands of memory that fade so fast behind us. Beautifully penned Dan. Brian, thank you. I think reminiscing is a good thing, and memories are the true treasure of our lives. Dan
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Post by goldenmyst on Oct 28, 2019 13:01:46 GMT -6
Dan, this made an especially indelible impression on my heart. All of my loved ones from childhood are either dead or the few surviving live faraway. I thank you for your offering here which inspires me to remember and cherish.
John
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Post by AquarianM on Oct 28, 2019 15:26:17 GMT -6
Dan, this made an especially indelible impression on my heart. All of my loved ones from childhood are either dead or the few surviving live faraway. I thank you for your offering here which inspires me to remember and cherish. John John, thank you. I am sorry for the losses you and all of us must suffer in this life. I'm glad to help bring them back to mind for you. Dan
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