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Post by Brian on Oct 13, 2019 3:30:23 GMT -6
She calls to me but I can't stay, Grains of sand have fallen away, My soul cries out for something new, Her tearful weeping makes me blue,
In this I wish I could be sure, She calls to me but I can't stay, She has intentions that are pure, I do not know what I can say,
The change is calling me today, It's ringing loudly in my ear, She calls to me but I can't stay, I say it's time to go my dear,
The touch of time changes all, Who live upon this great blue ball, I'll take my leave, I'm sad to say, She calls to me but I can't stay
Brian Paul Sullivan © 2009
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Post by lostineternity99 on Oct 13, 2019 3:37:58 GMT -6
Your poignant Quatern flows beautifully down the page, Brian ... great writing.
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Post by Catlady2710 on Oct 13, 2019 7:57:22 GMT -6
So very sad.
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Post by AquarianM on Oct 13, 2019 20:01:35 GMT -6
Some things just aren't meant to be. Well-writ.
Dan
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Post by Deleted on Oct 14, 2019 1:22:47 GMT -6
powerful scribe! Impossible to not feel the emotion in this! Extraordinary writing from the Writer Extraordinaire
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Post by simpledip on Oct 14, 2019 5:55:14 GMT -6
The touch of time changes all, Who live upon this great blue ball, I'll take my leave, I'm sad to say, She calls to me but I can't stay.
The horizon leans forward, Offering you space to place new steps of change
~ Maya Angelou.
Brian, You touched me deeply. Namaste. -Dip
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Post by augustsky on Oct 14, 2019 14:29:05 GMT -6
Emotion flows the page, so beautifully put, Good to read you again Brian
Enjoyed..
Sky~
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Post by QueenFoxy on Oct 14, 2019 15:29:28 GMT -6
So softly this touches my heart. So very sad and yet so beautiful.
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Post by Brian on Oct 14, 2019 17:45:34 GMT -6
Many thanks Rick, Cat, Dan, Michael, Namaste, Sky, Foxy. Sky, so happy to see you here
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