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Post by Deleted on Oct 12, 2019 3:14:19 GMT -6
Fire In My Soul
There is a fire in my soul that keeps on growing,
keeps on spreading,
consuming every part of me.
And though you cannot see this fire
you feel the intensity.
At some point I must let go.
I cannot hold onto this forever.
Someday there will come a time
when reality shall sever
my ties.
There will be a light that is not there.
And people walking everywhere.
And a madman crying to a fire of his own.
He shall stretch his arms over his head
and dance the dance of those now dead,
unlike the rest knowing that he must dance alone.
I will see this madman and recognize him
from another time before,
in the dancing flames of fire
where we sat on a rocky shore.
And then I danced.
And then I cried.
But when it comes time
we must die but I will not dance alone.
No.
I will dance together with myself
in the unknown.
There is a fire in my soul that keeps on growing,
keeps on spreading,
consuming every part of me.
And though you cannot see this fire
you feel the intensity.
--msl2019
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Post by lostineternity99 on Oct 12, 2019 3:42:24 GMT -6
I do feel the wonderful intensity of your poem, Mike ... great writing.
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Post by QueenFoxy on Oct 12, 2019 8:54:10 GMT -6
I feel the intensity, Michael. Great writng.
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Post by Catlady2710 on Oct 12, 2019 11:24:53 GMT -6
WOW!
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Post by AquarianM on Oct 13, 2019 1:46:48 GMT -6
It feels like change at depth, on a personal level..
Dan
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Post by Brian on Oct 13, 2019 3:10:44 GMT -6
Powerful work my friend. The depth of feeling in this is palatable.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 14, 2019 1:14:12 GMT -6
ty all Dan, spot on
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Post by simpledip on Oct 14, 2019 6:01:42 GMT -6
I will dance together with myself in the unknown.
There is a fire in my soul that keeps on growing...
Peace be with you Michael. - Dip
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Post by augustsky on Oct 14, 2019 14:22:37 GMT -6
Felt like a coming into ones own kind of write.
Nicely done Michael..
Sky~
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Post by Deleted on Oct 16, 2019 1:49:22 GMT -6
ty both
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