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Post by Deleted on Oct 12, 2019 3:08:46 GMT -6
Left
Left to watch the day's color
turning black and white.
Left to watch the day
combine to be gray.
Left to hear the wind whistle
blowing through old bones.
Left to hear old songs,
sing along.
Left to write the last note,
the words spark and aflame.
Left to write with cold hand,
love understand.
Left to walk a night street,
footfalls echo around,
lunatic laughter,
a bloody ground.
Left to be in the zone.
Air tugs at the skin.
Left to watch,
left to hear
all over again.
--msl2019
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Oct 12, 2019 3:51:55 GMT -6
Post by lostineternity99 on Oct 12, 2019 3:51:55 GMT -6
Such a powerfully poignant poem, Mike ... one to read multiple times.
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Oct 12, 2019 8:47:38 GMT -6
Post by QueenFoxy on Oct 12, 2019 8:47:38 GMT -6
Great poem, Michael. Well done.
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Oct 12, 2019 11:26:34 GMT -6
Post by Catlady2710 on Oct 12, 2019 11:26:34 GMT -6
Left...It touches the soul.
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Oct 13, 2019 1:43:19 GMT -6
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Post by AquarianM on Oct 13, 2019 1:43:19 GMT -6
This one left me cold inside with a feeling of dread and foreboding.
Dan
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Oct 13, 2019 3:12:35 GMT -6
Post by Brian on Oct 13, 2019 3:12:35 GMT -6
The loneliness echoes resoundingly through this Michael.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 14, 2019 1:12:43 GMT -6
thank you all, it's kinda dark, yeah but all good. I like to touch into my dark half once in a while...i don't like "him" but he's there but will never consume all of me
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Oct 14, 2019 6:03:48 GMT -6
Post by simpledip on Oct 14, 2019 6:03:48 GMT -6
thank you all, it's kinda dark, yeah but all good. I like to touch into my dark half once in a while...i don't like "him" but he's there but will never consume all of me As Cat says, ... "it touched my soul" Great writing Michael. Namaste
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Oct 16, 2019 1:48:36 GMT -6
Post by Deleted on Oct 16, 2019 1:48:36 GMT -6
ty Dip
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