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Post by augustsky on Oct 8, 2019 18:36:27 GMT -6
Sip of Autumn~
Sip of cider between thoughts.. a Fall remembered upon cat-tails of hope, of trees hanging fire, and a scarecrows dance among pumpkins bulging with delight.
That wonderful feeling of leaves that burn forever, burnt offerings of life and smoky love.
Hands in the pockets of his warm jacket, a harvest of sweet obscenities whispered at his back.
come fly..let us fly with the grey geese as they depart through a chilly sky, one last cry to apple cider time.
© Augustsky
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Post by susan on Oct 9, 2019 2:03:16 GMT -6
oh how pretty
susan
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Post by lostineternity99 on Oct 9, 2019 4:15:43 GMT -6
Hey Sky, Your delightful poem epitomizes why Autumn is your time of year; your sips satisfy like gulps with such wondrous imagery
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Post by Brian on Oct 9, 2019 4:55:13 GMT -6
Sky, this flows through the soul with an unparalleled seasonal delight.
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Post by AquarianM on Oct 9, 2019 8:35:32 GMT -6
Absolutely gorgeous, visually, emotionally, structurally. Beautiful work, if you can call it work rather than joy.
Dan
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Post by Catlady2710 on Oct 9, 2019 10:04:15 GMT -6
Beautifully described images of Autumn Wish I could fly with away with the geese as Autumn fades away into winter.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 12, 2019 2:35:06 GMT -6
You're like the Rocky Balboa of poetry Sky! and i wanna be your manager! I could easily be a crabby 'ol Mick
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Post by augustsky on Oct 13, 2019 22:02:28 GMT -6
Thanks Susan, glad you liked.
Sky~
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Post by augustsky on Oct 13, 2019 22:03:48 GMT -6
Yes it is Rick, enjoyed your response.. Thanks, Sky~
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Post by augustsky on Oct 13, 2019 22:05:10 GMT -6
Phoenix, So good to see you! Thank you for the wonderful reply. Sky~
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Post by augustsky on Oct 13, 2019 22:07:16 GMT -6
Dan, You say the Sweetest things always Thanks Poet. Sky~
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Post by augustsky on Oct 13, 2019 22:30:22 GMT -6
Thanks Cat, I wouldn't mind hitching a ride either lol Winter just lasts Too Long! Sky~ going to have to leave awhile & try coming back.. gremlins aren't letting me do anything rt. now.
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Post by simpledip on Oct 14, 2019 6:17:34 GMT -6
come fly..let us fly with the grey geese as they depart through a chilly sky.... Sky, Sitting in the mountains as the dusk descends, I am watching the geese fly across the snow peaks tinged crimson with the departing sun and your poem made me feel the call to fly with them. Thank you for a beautiful poem full of hope.. Namaste. - Dip
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Post by augustsky on Oct 14, 2019 13:58:15 GMT -6
Michael..thanks for the laughter..needed it. Now..I can't get the Rocky-theme-song out of my head lol Thank you M. Appreciate your Dear support. Sky~
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Post by augustsky on Oct 14, 2019 13:59:11 GMT -6
Dip, You're a sweetheart, Thank you
Sky~
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Post by Deleted on Oct 17, 2019 2:57:01 GMT -6
you're welcome and enjoy that theme song that won't go away (evil laughter)
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