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Post by goldenmyst on Sept 14, 2019 16:59:47 GMT -6
Love Duel - A Dream
Wife rebirths in raven haired splendor To love play with flowering pampas grass Pruned of those sharp leaves Down to its stiff stem We face off in the buff In pursuit of a competitive edge With soft tussocks our fencing swords She feints below my belt By tickling my spear with her plant plume My nether foil rises in counter-feint The contest is all but won by her Until I parry and thrust With my flowery clump Only to throw the game By lying face down on the floor Whereupon my spoken touché Concedes her every cuff With grass fluff Upon my duff To incur her gleeful giggles My brawn no match For her feminine mystique
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Post by QueenFoxy on Sept 19, 2019 17:13:35 GMT -6
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Post by goldenmyst on Sept 19, 2019 18:17:34 GMT -6
Beautiful tag my friend. And it captured the feel of my dream poem. It did indeed feel like learning to spread my wings again with the woman I love.
XoXoXo John
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Post by QueenFoxy on Sept 19, 2019 23:12:03 GMT -6
Cool write, John.
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Post by goldenmyst on Sept 20, 2019 13:33:09 GMT -6
Such a passionate embrace from an Arthurian time, much as I envision her and I ages past. XoXoXo John
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Post by QueenFoxy on Sept 21, 2019 21:04:20 GMT -6
Those were very special, and very romantic times, John.
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Post by goldenmyst on Sept 21, 2019 21:25:31 GMT -6
Indeed knights and their ladies. I've always loved ancient music from the times of knights and their ladies. I love your second tag too. You have a feel for composing images which take me away to a past I dream of visiting.
XoXoXo John
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Post by simpledip on Sept 22, 2019 5:35:29 GMT -6
Beautiful tag my friend. And it captured the feel of my dream poem. It did indeed feel like learning to spread my wings again with the woman I love. XoXoXo John John, You have painted picture of Two souls sharing body, mind and soul
both are hungry and share everything they have
a profound moment - two souls are in communion. - Dip
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Post by susan on Sept 22, 2019 6:53:19 GMT -6
this one's really cool
susan
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Post by goldenmyst on Sept 22, 2019 11:50:29 GMT -6
Dip,
Two souls in communion and reunited for another lifetime of love. Exactly my friend. I,m sure my lover woman and I will be together again for another time on earth. Thank you for your beautiful poem reply my friend. John
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Post by goldenmyst on Sept 22, 2019 11:52:20 GMT -6
Love knowing this was cool for you my friend Susan. That makes my heart happy. John
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