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Post by eezebard on May 8, 2019 4:52:48 GMT -6
~~~ A weather beaten relic still survives to fluster gale As memories entertain they fetch a smile and tell a tale Its solid composition proves the carpenter was smart for every day he deemed it play a most important part ~ Behind the house across the yard twas quite the ways to walk Beyond the barn and past the shed where chickens met the block Amidst the flower garden as mother kept it well On winding path 'neath blooming vine pervading its scents of smell ~ The call of nature filled the air the evening breeze could flower More oft' than not as Grandpa sat to read beneath the bower The early birds would fight the coons for dew worms on the ground The richest crop to bless a hook were gathered close around ~ Spiders never rested nights they wove from every place The morning mist befell those webs that burst upon your face And honeybees felt right at home I always wondered why Though I tarried not nor lingered long as thunder struck the sky ~ Winter storms a howling it sure could send a shiver Backsides barely touched the seat as you began to quiver A discarded gem from yesterday this yard abode's vocation Intersects with intellect and indecisive inspiration ~~~
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Post by lostineternity99 on May 8, 2019 5:40:31 GMT -6
Your wonderful poem would fit right in with the 19th century with its classic style and word choices. *applauds*
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Post by QueenFoxy on May 8, 2019 20:30:48 GMT -6
Totally delightful.
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Post by Deleted on May 9, 2019 1:58:58 GMT -6
Another fantastic write! Really enjoying reading your work again
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Post by Catlady2710 on May 14, 2019 9:47:35 GMT -6
Each line bring a rural pictures to the mind. You are truly talented.
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Post by simpledip on May 14, 2019 19:44:43 GMT -6
The Farmer from distant mountains bows deeply. I appreciate the beauty of Life that you have painted. Namaste. - Dip
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Post by AquarianM on May 19, 2019 2:05:56 GMT -6
That, sir, is a seat with a view. Beautiful.
Dan
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Post by augustsky on May 19, 2019 23:37:03 GMT -6
If that crescent moon could talk.. this Poem surely brought a smile Wonderfully told Poet. Sky~
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