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Post by eezebard on May 4, 2019 13:44:58 GMT -6
If a promise understood the spoken word would it ignore the roar of devotion's cheer or disregard the sight of a despondent tear Better... it bond the two hearts than falsify its token pledge because its grasp just might quell that offensive urge and thus defend the heart from a tormentor's dirge chastising the inconsiderate tongue that swells them ~ Key words mistyped in letters dear where finger strokes and angry thoughts combine so that sadly one flawed phrase inclements and forever storms our minds ~ If promises could interlace with beating hearts Perhaps tears could find defence from poison darts ~~~
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Post by Deleted on May 5, 2019 4:28:02 GMT -6
Ah! Very nicely said! It is certainly a pleasure reading the workings of your mind and heart again my friend. Enjoyed
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Post by eezebard on May 5, 2019 5:44:10 GMT -6
Thanks Michael, I’m glad you liked it, and people really do need to step up to their promises and bring them to life... politicians are not exempt.
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Post by lostineternity99 on May 5, 2019 6:19:26 GMT -6
"where finger strokes and angry thoughts combine so that sadly one flawed phrase inclements and forever storms our minds" There are so many flawed phrases all over the airwaves ... yes politicians need to start keeping promises, we can only hope.
Your poem is superbly written and its premise, profound.
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Post by eezebard on May 5, 2019 6:52:02 GMT -6
Thank you Rick, I agree, the airwaves are certainly saturated these days.
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Post by QueenFoxy on May 9, 2019 22:21:02 GMT -6
Love this one. It just says so much.
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Post by simpledip on May 10, 2019 7:37:32 GMT -6
Politicians are same in any country. They talk and talk, but hardly deliver what they promise.
Thank you for sharing. Namaste. - Dip
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Post by Catlady2710 on May 14, 2019 9:41:56 GMT -6
A promise is a promise is a promise. Break too many and faith is lost. Great poem!
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