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Post by eezebard on May 1, 2019 12:02:48 GMT -6
~~~ Wondering why I think of you Is it the softness of your lips The gentle caress of fingers teasing every hair and fibre The sweetness of smile or eyes that encircle my deepest thoughts while my heart
R E T U N E S
to the key of your sultry voice
~ IF ~
emotion runs rampant Explosion surely follows and there's no room for logic since you fill my every thought ~~~
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Post by Catlady2710 on May 1, 2019 13:12:06 GMT -6
Very romantic
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Post by QueenFoxy on May 1, 2019 19:25:16 GMT -6
So beautifully romantic. Love it Eeze.
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Post by augustsky on May 1, 2019 20:38:01 GMT -6
And just like that..the spell is cast, this is Beautifully done. I recognize you Rex..have seen you around & have read your Wonderful work. Look forward to more Poet Sky~
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Post by Deleted on May 2, 2019 2:24:54 GMT -6
So good to read you again! I believe I mainly read you at the Maelstrom. I do remember you. This is great! And isn't it just like this? Love it
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Post by lostineternity99 on May 2, 2019 5:10:10 GMT -6
Your poem is beautifully romantic, Rex and stylish as well
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Post by eezebard on May 2, 2019 8:05:33 GMT -6
Thank you all, it feels good to be remembered and I’m happy to find that so many of you enjoyed this piece
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Post by QueenFoxy on May 2, 2019 18:21:42 GMT -6
Rex, you can bet you touched some hearts when you are fondly remembered by so many people. I love this poem.
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Post by AquarianM on May 3, 2019 0:15:04 GMT -6
I love the formatting - the hard stops and bold voice. Well-writ!
Dan
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Post by eezebard on May 5, 2019 5:52:20 GMT -6
QueenFoxy, very kind of you to say that, thank you Dan, I have written in this style for a purpose... I like to write in such a way that makes it easiest for me to read aloud at a poetry reading. The style creates the emphasis.
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