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Post by poetinpink on Apr 7, 2019 23:39:16 GMT -6
I want to be your butterfly Please unfurl me from my cocoon Tenderly release my passion Beneath the light of summers moon
Loose my spirit send it soaring Watch as my wings fly ever free Wrap me up within your heart~strings Bequeath your precious love to me
Journey with me to loves pure bliss Laying aside all of our pain Lets venture into happiness It's time to leave behind the rain
Fill my soul with your sweet essence On the painted wings of morrow Let us join together as one Casting away all our sorrow
Do you dare take up wings and fly Do you favor a brand new start If the answer is truly yes Then simply take flight with my heart
© Poet In Pink
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Post by Deleted on Apr 8, 2019 0:58:46 GMT -6
Very nice Peep Freedom in all ways here...this is just good for the soul..definitely a favorite here..you knocked your socks off with this one!
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Post by lostineternity99 on Apr 8, 2019 5:11:54 GMT -6
Hi Alana, You soared with this romantic gem! It is one of your very best Your verses are silky smooth and the image too is beautiful (((huggs))) Ricky
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Post by Catlady2710 on Apr 8, 2019 5:58:27 GMT -6
What a beautiful concept of romance.
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Post by QueenFoxy on Apr 8, 2019 8:01:30 GMT -6
Very, very beautiful, Alana.
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Post by AquarianM on Apr 9, 2019 1:36:00 GMT -6
Beautiful, Alana. Should be a song.
Dan
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Post by poetinpink on Apr 9, 2019 22:17:41 GMT -6
Very nice Peep Freedom in all ways here...this is just good for the soul..definitely a favorite here..you knocked your socks off with this one! ~Mic~ Thankies for your kind compliments ~ Happy you enjoyed Huggerz Alana
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Post by poetinpink on Apr 9, 2019 22:24:30 GMT -6
Hi Alana, You soared with this romantic gem! It is one of your very best Your verses are silky smooth and the image too is beautiful (((huggs))) Ricky ~Ricky~ Thank you so much for your sweet compliments ~ Glad to know you think it is one of my best ~ Thanks for making me smile Huggerz Alana
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Post by poetinpink on Apr 9, 2019 22:26:11 GMT -6
What a beautiful concept of romance. ~Cat~ Thank you for stopping in for a read ~ Appreciate your kind words Huggerz Alana
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Post by poetinpink on Apr 9, 2019 22:27:56 GMT -6
Very, very beautiful, Alana. ~Foxy~ Thank you for reading and for your lovely response ~ Happy you enjoyed Huggerz Alana
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Post by poetinpink on Apr 9, 2019 22:30:43 GMT -6
Beautiful, Alana. Should be a song. Dan ~Dan~ Thank you for your visit and kind compliment ~ I never thought of it...But it would make a good song ~ Thanks for that ~ Now I've got melodies running through my head Huggerz Alana
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Post by augustsky on Apr 10, 2019 22:48:12 GMT -6
Rhyme-Sublime Alana, such a feel-good write. Sky~
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Post by simpledip on Apr 11, 2019 7:35:35 GMT -6
Do you dare take up wings and fly Do you favor a brand new start If the answer is truly yes Then simply take flight with my heart
There are moments when we connect to souls we have never met physically
that take us to uncharted area of being together, thinking same thing:
taking us to the edge of time a time before words
when all that existed was thought without form .
Bows deeply.
-Dip
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Post by goldenmyst on Apr 12, 2019 19:26:20 GMT -6
Alana, this invitation would inspire a man like me to take a flight with you. Your rainbow smile shimmers through these words which revive this old guy's heart to feel the possibility of love again. Just maybe one day this will happen for me. Your positivity turns me into a butterfly on the wing.
Hugs, John
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Post by poetinpink on Apr 13, 2019 15:51:45 GMT -6
Rhyme-Sublime Alana, such a feel-good write. Sky~ ~Sky~ Thank you for taking the time to read and for your lovely reply Huggerz Alana
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Post by poetinpink on Apr 13, 2019 15:57:01 GMT -6
Do you dare take up wings and fly Do you favor a brand new start If the answer is truly yes Then simply take flight with my heart
There are moments when we connect to souls we have never met physically
that take us to uncharted area of being together, thinking same thing:
taking us to the edge of time a time before words
when all that existed was thought without form .
Bows deeply.
-Dip ~Dip~ I thank you for that beautiful response poem ~ Your kind thoughts are very touching ~ Always a pleasure to hear from you Huggerz Alana
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Post by poetinpink on Apr 13, 2019 15:59:05 GMT -6
Alana, this invitation would inspire a man like me to take a flight with you. Your rainbow smile shimmers through these words which revive this old guy's heart to feel the possibility of love again. Just maybe one day this will happen for me. Your positivity turns me into a butterfly on the wing. Hugs, John ~John~ Thank you for your kind compliments you smile my heart Here's to flying free and finding love my friend Huggerz Alana
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