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Post by augustsky on Apr 4, 2019 16:12:41 GMT -6
Beautiful Drifter~
He drifts on the outskirts of beautiful, part of it belonged to him, he'd helped build it, with the mighty hammer of his heart.
Turned away from possibility, as her scent filled his imagination, perhaps he couldn't see past tomorrow, beyond the comfortable conformity, obligation stiffened his upper lip.
He chose instead the familiar, the safe niche, where regret can pierce the soul.
But she knows he loses himself in dreams, travels the fields and meadows gathering poems among the wildflowers, as he rolls in with the clouds, a touch of sky upon his tongue.
©Augustsky
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Post by simpledip on Apr 4, 2019 20:09:11 GMT -6
But she knows he loses himself in dreams, travels the fields and meadows gathering poems among the wildflowers, as he rolls in with the clouds, a touch of sky upon his tongue.
Bows deeply. Beautiful!!! he listens to the music in swish of falling leaves
in an ecstatic dance across the blue sky
blinks away the hurts swimming inside him
dreams again and smiles
His every breath is a prayer
~ Dip
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Post by AquarianM on Apr 5, 2019 0:57:25 GMT -6
Now, THAT, my fellow readers, is poetry. Beautiful.
Dan
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Post by Deleted on Apr 5, 2019 1:00:10 GMT -6
Right?!....Wow!...You're amazing Sky
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Post by QueenFoxy on Apr 5, 2019 12:50:05 GMT -6
Kudos to you both, Sky and Dip. Both are awesomely beautiful.
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Post by susan on Apr 5, 2019 12:51:24 GMT -6
oh this is very pretty skye
susan
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Post by Catlady2710 on Apr 6, 2019 10:24:52 GMT -6
Beautiful Drifter is the perfect name for this poem - beautiful!
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Post by augustsky on Apr 6, 2019 15:44:18 GMT -6
What a gorgeous reply in Poem Dip, Thank you..I Love it! Sky~
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Post by augustsky on Apr 6, 2019 15:45:41 GMT -6
Dan, You're quite the sweet Poetry-man.. Thank you Sky~
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Post by augustsky on Apr 6, 2019 15:47:14 GMT -6
Thank you Michael..for Smiling my heart! Sky~
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Post by augustsky on Apr 6, 2019 15:49:23 GMT -6
Thank you Foxy, Yes..Dip's response was a Special Treat! Sky~
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Post by augustsky on Apr 6, 2019 15:50:41 GMT -6
Thank you Susan, pleased you liked. Sky~
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Post by augustsky on Apr 6, 2019 15:51:43 GMT -6
Thank you Cat, appreciate your thoughts always. Sky~
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Post by goldenmyst on Apr 7, 2019 19:22:57 GMT -6
Drifting was never more spiritual and beautiful than in your mystic portrait of this man. There is an ambiance in your poetry which is your signature. I know I'm in for a transcendent experience when I read you..
XoXo John
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Post by susan on Apr 7, 2019 19:37:37 GMT -6
i agree a great name for the well done poem
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Post by poetinpink on Apr 7, 2019 23:00:33 GMT -6
~Sky~ Beautiful and hearttouching dear friend ~ Always such a pleasure to journey through your words ~ Enjoyed Huggerz Alana
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Post by augustsky on Apr 10, 2019 22:28:27 GMT -6
Poet John, You're quite the sweet-talker Thank you. Sky~
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Post by augustsky on Apr 10, 2019 22:29:41 GMT -6
Thanks again dear Susan. Sky~
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Post by augustsky on Apr 10, 2019 22:35:14 GMT -6
Sweet Alana, Thank you, you've always been such a great supporter to my work , & others too. Attachment DeletedBTW...Love your Easter pic, pretty as can be.. Sky~
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