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Post by Deleted on Apr 4, 2019 1:35:47 GMT -6
I remember the day when it hailed in July. I remember the people as they hurried by. I watched from my window as the hail fell. It was pea-size but I am sure it hurt just as well.
The hail tap, tapped in front of my face and the rain soon decided to pick up its pace. The clouds I could tell were a sickly green and I shuddered at the thought of what it could mean.
Some people still scattered and scurried around. I was certain that soon the sirens would sound. The thunder was deafening, the lightning so bright! All of a sudden day turned into night
and the hail grew larger as it continued to fall. Before long it was as big as a basketball and the windows soon shattered as I backed away. The neighborhood soon was in great disarray.
I turned on the radio. Chaos was everywhere. The sirens then sounded. I begged God hear my prayer! People were screaming, some still running outside. That day in July there were many who died.
Bodies were discovered all over the place. Houses and cars were sitting in waste and the forecast was calling for more troubled skies. I turned off the radio and listened to cries.
--msl2019
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Post by lostineternity99 on Apr 4, 2019 5:39:46 GMT -6
Wow ... this is incredibly dark because it could happen. Very potent writing *shivers*
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Post by QueenFoxy on Apr 6, 2019 0:34:25 GMT -6
Wow Michael, that is some really deep and powerful writing. The weather is a powerful force and such a scene could quickly be reality. So real is your description.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 6, 2019 2:10:51 GMT -6
Thank you both.
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Post by Catlady2710 on Apr 6, 2019 10:49:42 GMT -6
Very powerful writing Michael!
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Post by Deleted on Apr 6, 2019 19:52:23 GMT -6
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Post by QueenFoxy on Apr 6, 2019 23:17:37 GMT -6
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Post by Catlady2710 on Apr 7, 2019 9:12:58 GMT -6
I know I commented about your poem already, but it really does hit a nerve. Back when hubby and I first got married, we were driving home on a busy highway when it started to hail, and the stones were as big as golf balls. I kept waiting for the car's windshield to break or for an accident to happen, or maybe even both. I was sure glad to get home that night.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 8, 2019 0:43:35 GMT -6
wow.....i bet!
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