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Post by susan on Jan 17, 2019 19:54:47 GMT -6
on a poetry group that i belong to, like tobabganing, this is what the owner found from me, 6 years ago, and has brought it forward
susan
take me away
to a land that i do not know
but yet a land of plenty a land that i'll want
to see again, and again -
whispering winds take me slowly, if you please
and then release me
on decending clouds that send me shivers
but not harshly -
whispering winds sift me through time and space
like the soft petals
of a rose
but yet, never let me fall -
whispering winds take me to your treasure trove in a grove of trees
so that i might see what's surrounding me -
whispering winds with wings that fly, high i ask you again
take me away - the end
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Post by QueenFoxy on Jan 17, 2019 22:58:55 GMT -6
A great find, Susan and thank you for bringing it to the Castle, It is a beautiful journey with a lot of promise. Take me with you?
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Post by susan on Jan 19, 2019 17:45:05 GMT -6
thank you foxy
much appreciated
i will a bit later when i have more time write down a few what i call nonsense poems...that i have done and a few other chirstmas and winter poems...don't worry, not all at once
susan
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Post by QueenFoxy on Jan 19, 2019 23:03:59 GMT -6
Whenever you are ready, m'lady.
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Post by simpledip on Jan 21, 2019 0:02:45 GMT -6
Whispering wind brings to you to a place that are within your mystic soul
you have to go deep within your own unknown self to discover what the answers are.
Namaste - Dip
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Post by QueenFoxy on Jan 21, 2019 15:13:52 GMT -6
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Post by Deleted on Mar 1, 2019 2:55:13 GMT -6
Very spiritual, like
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Post by susan on Mar 7, 2019 9:40:00 GMT -6
thank you dip, foxy, micheal
susan
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Post by Brian on Oct 19, 2019 19:56:12 GMT -6
Lovely write Susan. Makes me think back on homappy moments from my childhood.
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Post by susan on Oct 21, 2019 15:54:31 GMT -6
thank you brian much appreciated
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Post by lostineternity99 on Oct 22, 2019 3:30:08 GMT -6
So magical, Susan ... your words did take me away to a serene place
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Post by susan on Oct 27, 2019 19:57:28 GMT -6
thankyou rick,
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