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Post by lostineternity99 on Jan 17, 2019 16:00:15 GMT -6
Upon Earth One I have such fun So many friends, have I; A golden sun Magic tales spun... But could I say goodbye?
Upon Earth Two So much to do New friends are there to meet: Its skies are blue With magic too... The wee faeries are sweet!
But then I see Upon Earth Three No wars or strife exists; Pure are its seas And fruited trees... Would my Earth One be missed?
Upon Earth Four Is fun galore Smiles rule every day; With mystic lore Enchantments soar... With dragons, I could play!
So many more Earths to explore How can I choose just one; It is a chore To choose a door... Should all others, I shun?
Just then I see No mystery Upon each Earth, I dwell; More than one me The simple key... All doubts, this thought does quell!
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Post by goldenmyst on Jan 17, 2019 19:17:23 GMT -6
Playfully fascinating with an ending which unlocked the mystery beautifully. I loved dwelling in your earths and imagining the wonder our planet could be if only the best of us held sway.
John
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Post by susan on Jan 17, 2019 19:57:55 GMT -6
oh this is truely beautiful
susan
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Post by susan on Jan 17, 2019 20:01:32 GMT -6
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Post by Deleted on Jan 18, 2019 3:17:17 GMT -6
This is very cool and hey, who knows what all is out there. Multiple universes, dimensions...
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Post by lostineternity99 on Jan 18, 2019 6:08:36 GMT -6
Playfully fascinating with an ending which unlocked the mystery beautifully. I loved dwelling in your earths and imagining the wonder our planet could be if only the best of us held sway. John Thank you for your complimentary thoughts, John; yes our Earth could be a paradise again if its evil rulers had a change of heart or simply stepped down to let people live in harmony.
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Post by lostineternity99 on Jan 18, 2019 6:10:25 GMT -6
oh this is truely beautiful susan Thank you very much, Susan
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Post by lostineternity99 on Jan 18, 2019 6:13:17 GMT -6
you deserve a writing prize for doing this one susan I appreciate your writing prize ... thank you!
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Post by lostineternity99 on Jan 18, 2019 6:14:49 GMT -6
This is very cool and hey, who knows what all is out there. Multiple universes, dimensions... Thank you, Mike! Yes .. .there are no limits to the possibilities.
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Post by Bri on Feb 1, 2019 12:30:17 GMT -6
I’m kinda fond of Earth Two myself ~smile~ Thank you Rick, your poetry is still magic to my eyes and heart... 👏👏
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Post by lostineternity99 on Feb 2, 2019 6:01:47 GMT -6
Hey Bri, Earth Two is awesome
That is wonderful to know, my friend ... thank you very much.
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Post by poetinpink on Feb 9, 2019 20:47:56 GMT -6
~Ricky~ Well worth a second read dear friend! I'm still waiting on your next trip! lol Huggerz
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Post by lostineternity99 on Feb 10, 2019 6:46:37 GMT -6
LOL, Alana!
Thank you for coming back to read this one again and ... my next trip shall be soon
(((huggs)))
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Post by Stephanie on Feb 14, 2019 10:28:10 GMT -6
Upon Earth Four Is fun galore Smiles rule every day; With mystic lore Enchantments soar... With dragons, I could play! Oh, wouldn't it be wonderful if we could play with dragons (and not get hurt)? I love this playful scribe, sweet Rick. I've SO missed reading your work and collaborating with you. Hopefully someday my muse will return and we can try again. Love you! *HUGS*
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Post by lostineternity99 on Feb 14, 2019 15:02:28 GMT -6
Hi Stephanie,
Yes ... playing with dragons would be loads of fun! They would not hurt us Thank you for your praise and quoting your favorite stanza. . Oh yes it would be fantastic to collaborate with you again! I know your muse is merely hiding and will return one day Love you too, my talented friend (((hugs)))
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Post by augustsky on Feb 17, 2019 17:00:46 GMT -6
Very Cool premise, so there were Many Rick's.. your clone on each earth? Enjoy your work Rick I read somewhere that I couldn't be cloned because of my blood type..who knows if true.. Sky~
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Post by lostineternity99 on Feb 18, 2019 7:30:10 GMT -6
Yes, Sky ... my clone is on each earth
I am happy you enjoy my all over the place creativity, my friend Poetry magic has unlimited power so yes, you could also live on every earth! Thank you
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