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Post by lostineternity99 on Nov 25, 2018 5:55:38 GMT -6
 Young Arthur is a mighty knight
He believes Merlin is too weak;
Merlin works magic, out of sight.
Young Arthur is a mighty knight
Sometimes he gets in scary plights;
Merlin saves him but has to sneak!
Young Arthur is a mighty knight...
He believes Merlin is too weak. |
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Post by goldenmyst on Nov 25, 2018 8:37:37 GMT -6
A playfully wonderful retelling of legend. Love the play of weak and sneak. You have created your own genre. and you write it like none other.  John |
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Post by lostineternity99 on Nov 26, 2018 5:55:57 GMT -6
Thank you very much, John! I love writing my own versions of legends and fairy tales ... this was based on a TV series I loved where Arthur and Merlin were both young adults |
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Post by QueenFoxy on Nov 26, 2018 11:08:05 GMT -6
Brings back sweet memories of my favorite TV series. Love it, Rick. Great write.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 27, 2018 2:41:13 GMT -6
Merlin needs to whup some booty
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Post by lostineternity99 on Nov 27, 2018 6:27:00 GMT -6
Brings back sweet memories of my favorite TV series. Love it, Rick. Great write. Thank you, Foxy; we both really miss this fantastic series |
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Post by lostineternity99 on Nov 27, 2018 6:27:28 GMT -6
Merlin needs to whup some booty LOL
He did just that! |
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Post by AquarianM on Nov 28, 2018 2:18:41 GMT -6
Egoic training is in order, I see. Cool poem, Rick.
Dan
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Post by lostineternity99 on Nov 28, 2018 5:45:16 GMT -6
Yes it sure is, Dan; thank you |
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Post by simpledip on Nov 28, 2018 20:18:39 GMT -6
The simple farmer from far away mountains love stories.
More please.
Namaste.
-Dip
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Post by lostineternity99 on Nov 29, 2018 5:50:12 GMT -6
Thank you, Dip; I am happy to know you like my stories. I will write more |
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See you all more tomorrow. Happy Friday/weekend everyone 
