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Post by goldenmyst on Nov 22, 2018 23:10:10 GMT -6
YMCA Bunkroom
A bearded priest from the dregs of society Whose cologne masks his pungency Preaches to the huddled hobos Of fragrant worlds in the Andes Where the bathless streets find their antidote In spring-fed pools for fresh starts For road trodden pilgrims with worn shoes There the Quinoa turns purple with spring With more maize than people And avocados ripe as a maiden’s breasts Are just as ready to be squeezed But with the virtue of being edible Ye who listen to the ranting of this old man Take them with a grain of his salty lithium But these disciples nod from his lullaby sermon While the grey-haired apostle witnesses to grab them by their scruffy hair And drag them like children Through the supermarket Of America’s salad days
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Post by lostineternity99 on Nov 23, 2018 6:40:24 GMT -6
The extreme greed of a few have ruined prosperity for the masses as your vibrant imagery shows, John. This is my favorite part:
"There the Quinoa turns purple with spring
With more maize than people"
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Post by simpledip on Nov 23, 2018 7:31:25 GMT -6
Where the bathless streets find their antidote In spring-fed pools for fresh starts...
Superb images. This reminds me that the same applies to Life today. Thank you. Namaste
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Post by goldenmyst on Nov 23, 2018 8:27:25 GMT -6
Rick, I am so glad that you picked up on the political themes here. Your perceptions are keen and your comment passionate. And I very much appreciate that those lines especially appealed to you. Thank you, my brother. Dip, much gratitude for understanding the ageless and timeless truths in my poem. Your wisdom and depth of understanding are deeply appreciated. Indeed ancient times live on in our heritage which still applies today. I thank you, my brother, from my heart. John
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Post by QueenFoxy on Nov 23, 2018 21:19:44 GMT -6
Very interesting, John.
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Post by goldenmyst on Nov 23, 2018 21:22:47 GMT -6
Thanks for reading my friend, Foxy. This is an imaginary night in the YMCA bunk room which is for the homeless. I spent a night in such a place long ago. So here I added the mad priest to the scene.
XoXo John
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Post by AquarianM on Nov 24, 2018 17:06:09 GMT -6
So much sad truth here, John. We need systemic humanity instead if systemic greed.
Dan
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Post by goldenmyst on Nov 24, 2018 18:31:12 GMT -6
You couldn't be more right, my friend. Hopefully, the blue wave we had is a harbinger of better times ahead.
John
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