Suzy's Secret Smile

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Suzy's Secret Smile Nov 9, 2018 22:35:32 GMT -6 lostineternity99 likes this

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Post by goldenmyst on Nov 9, 2018 22:35:32 GMT -6

Suzy's Secret Smile

Her waggish tongue tickles his ears
with the British charm of a peasant girl
raised on tongue in cheek earthiness.
Déjà vu takes him by surprise
as she gives him a sidelong glance
with the fiery eyes of a Lass
ready to greet the sailors in Blackburn.

Last Edit: Nov 9, 2018 22:50:15 GMT -6 by goldenmyst

"My muse changes clothes at the drop of a hat"

lostineternity99 Vesuvious Administrator & Official Castle Poet Posts: 133,609	Suzy's Secret Smile Nov 10, 2018 6:51:00 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by lostineternity99 on Nov 10, 2018 6:51:00 GMT -6 Fabulous imagery is in your snapshot poem, John; she sounds delightful and more than playful

AquarianM Super Star PC POet Living in a word tornado... Posts: 6,275 Country: United States of America	Suzy's Secret Smile Nov 10, 2018 11:26:40 GMT -6 via mobile Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by AquarianM on Nov 10, 2018 11:26:40 GMT -6 Sounds like a fun day, John. Dan
	Romantic, I love my wife, family, and Humanity. I.T. & Telecomm Nerd, I'm back in long-distance telecomm since November 2022. Sci-Fi & Comic-Book super-hero guy, I watch & read all things Marvel, DC, and more. Musically, I listen and futz. Podcastistic Host, I do a YouTube channel. But when my Muse comes to town, I get swept up in a word tornado, and no subject matter can escape...

goldenmyst Guiding Light Star PC POET Posts: 20,308	Suzy's Secret Smile Nov 10, 2018 12:02:51 GMT -6 AquarianM likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by goldenmyst on Nov 10, 2018 12:02:51 GMT -6 Rick, the woman depicted herein was a delight to word paint. Glad you enjoyed my friend. Dan, though fictional, the scene here was indeed fun to write. Thank you so much my friend. John
	"My muse changes clothes at the drop of a hat"

QueenFoxy Administrator Warrior Queen Posts: 270,985	Suzy's Secret Smile Nov 10, 2018 18:32:48 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by QueenFoxy on Nov 10, 2018 18:32:48 GMT -6 Very pleasant and fun poem, John.

goldenmyst Guiding Light Star PC POET Posts: 20,308	Suzy's Secret Smile Nov 10, 2018 18:48:07 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by goldenmyst on Nov 10, 2018 18:48:07 GMT -6 Glad you enjoyed Foxy, my friend. I enjoy writing these breezy poems. XoXo John
	"My muse changes clothes at the drop of a hat"

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