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Post by augustsky on Oct 22, 2018 18:10:39 GMT -6
From the Corner of my Eye~
My clairvoyant bread
Bewitches you,
And from my corner
I see clean through
Your tiger's eye,
I can make you raptured-raw again,
Born again passion
Is not just for the very young,
Those distant drums
Press against your chest,
Fill your core,
You feel invincible,
Even your bones speak to me,
I am your Salome,
Veils of silk-surrender
Pool at your feet,
In dream you appear,
Back-lit by a swollen ghostly moon
In search of a host,
You cloak my body
As a Hot wind
Across a starry desert dune,
And I am Greedily
Consumed..
©Augustsky
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Post by lostineternity99 on Oct 23, 2018 6:04:38 GMT -6
Wow! I was totally captivated by your words, Sky ... so perfect for this season  *five ravenous stars* Rick  |
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Post by AquarianM on Oct 24, 2018 0:06:33 GMT -6
I was thinking "Earth goddess" as I was reading this. It's both sensual and powerful, and also triumphant.
Dan
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Post by QueenFoxy on Oct 24, 2018 14:36:38 GMT -6
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Post by augustsky on Oct 24, 2018 19:37:03 GMT -6
Rick, I'll take your *Stars* any day..Thank you  Sky~ |
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Post by augustsky on Oct 24, 2018 19:38:52 GMT -6
Dan, Your observations are wonderful..ya know that.  Thanks for the Dear reply.  Sky~ |
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Post by augustsky on Oct 24, 2018 19:45:02 GMT -6
Foxy, That is a Gorgeous verse, Thank you.  Sky~ |
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Post by Deleted on Oct 25, 2018 3:28:35 GMT -6
Very cool! I am always awed by your talent. My sister-in-law says awesome too
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Post by augustsky on Oct 25, 2018 12:54:09 GMT -6
Many Thanks to you Michael, & your sister-in-law too. Appreciate your support always friend.. Sky~ |
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Post by goldenmyst on Oct 28, 2018 19:13:38 GMT -6
The seduction here was awesome! Your gift with imagery and narrative is displayed with splendor here. I felt the pull of this woman as she enticed me. ;-)
XoXo
John
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Post by augustsky on Oct 30, 2018 23:59:03 GMT -6
John, To feel a write is grand, Thank you. Sky~ |
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