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Post by lostineternity99 on Oct 1, 2018 6:52:18 GMT -6
With my mind still, I feel a chill
The very air seems like it cares;
A static charge, it is quite large...
I start to float without a coat.
An open door so out I pour
Into the cold, my atoms fold
This conscious state is really great...
Just as it seems, a lucid dream!
An uphill flight into the night
My speed in tune, well past the moon;
In astral flight, stars sure shine bright...
Venus I see, though not carefree.
Venus exhales, she seems so frail
At lightning speed I check her need;
A brand new scar, her beauty mars...
Meteor strikes she does not like!
I let her know that her sweet glow
Is still the same, to feel no shame;
In that moment, a missive sent...
It seems that Mars, finds cute her scar.
My astral flight was a delight
We wave goodbye then back I fly;
When morning shakes my soul awake
I shall recall ... it was a ball!
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Post by QueenFoxy on Oct 2, 2018 8:17:03 GMT -6
This is so fun and bouncy, Rick, There's nothing like a fantastic, lucid dream to inspire a lilting poem like this. Love, love, love it.
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Post by simpledip on Oct 2, 2018 20:19:57 GMT -6
My astral flight was a delight
We wave goodbye then back I fly;
When morning shakes my soul awake
I shall recall ... it was a ball!
Rick,
Next time, please take me with you...
I admire the way you write - simple and musical way .
Namaste. - Dip
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Post by lostineternity99 on Oct 3, 2018 6:03:40 GMT -6
This is so fun and bouncy, Rick, There's nothing like a fantastic, lucid dream to inspire a lilting poem like this. Love, love, love it. Fun, bouncy and lilting ... I love your words of praise Foxy. I agree that lucid dreams are poetry inspiring; thank you very much! |
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Post by lostineternity99 on Oct 3, 2018 6:08:39 GMT -6
My astral flight was a delight We wave goodbye then back I fly; When morning shakes my soul awake I shall recall ... it was a ball! Rick, Next time, please take me with you... I admire the way you write - simple and musical way . Namaste. - Dip Hello, Dip; I would be happy to take you with me.
Thank you for the uplifting thoughts on my writing, I really appreciate them ... Namaste,
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Post by QueenFoxy on Oct 6, 2018 22:25:36 GMT -6
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Post by lostineternity99 on Oct 7, 2018 6:15:03 GMT -6
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Post by AquarianM on Oct 13, 2018 20:10:29 GMT -6
That sounds like a wonderful dream, Rick. My favorite dreams are ones where I am flying.
Dan
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Post by Deleted on Oct 14, 2018 2:00:27 GMT -6
So you're the one hittin' on me Venus! The twins weren't enough huh?
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Post by lostineternity99 on Oct 14, 2018 6:15:30 GMT -6
That sounds like a wonderful dream, Rick. My favorite dreams are ones where I am flying. Dan Thank you, Dan and ... they are my favorite dreams, too! |
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Post by lostineternity99 on Oct 14, 2018 6:16:59 GMT -6
So you're the one hittin' on me Venus! The twins weren't enough huh? LOL, Mike! I was an innocent by-flyer  |
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Post by goldenmyst on Dec 3, 2018 17:51:44 GMT -6
Rick, this is a new favorite of yours for me. When I was young I used to dream about astral projection. Your have described the sheer joy of traveling the solar system while leaving behind the body. Your poem took me there and showed me the pure delight of what it might be like. John |
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Post by QueenFoxy on Dec 3, 2018 18:38:51 GMT -6
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Post by goldenmyst on Dec 3, 2018 19:18:17 GMT -6
Those words said it all for me today. I've been missing people who have passed on today. Your tag was the remedy. Thanks for sharing.
XoXo
John
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Post by QueenFoxy on Dec 3, 2018 21:34:51 GMT -6
Hi' ya John. I think I told you once, I have a tag for just about everything and I love posting them when they fit the situation. That's MY poetry, Love my tags.  |
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