Bared Fear

Brian
Guiding Light Star

Moderator - Writer Extraordinaire

Posts: 93,796

Bared Fear Aug 17, 2018 5:52:36 GMT -6 lostineternity99 and Castle Court Jester like this

Quote

Post by Brian on Aug 17, 2018 5:52:36 GMT -6

It bleeds, it cries, it burns through the night,
Damaged spirit, terrorized plight,
Steel heart, cold pump, turning to rust,
Dry tears splash, dust upon dust,
Lost one, lone one, forever unseen,
So pale, so faded, unshimmered sheen,

Damaged spirit terrorized plight,
It bleeds, it cries, it burns through the night,
Dry tears splash, dust upon dust,
Steel heart, cold pump, turning to rust,
So paled, so faded, unshimmered sheen,
Lost one, lone one, forever unseen.

Brian Paul Sullivan © 2010

QueenFoxy Administrator Warrior Queen Posts: 270,985	Bared Fear Aug 17, 2018 15:03:00 GMT -6 Brian likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by QueenFoxy on Aug 17, 2018 15:03:00 GMT -6 Nice write, Brian.
	Last Edit: Aug 17, 2018 15:03:48 GMT -6 by QueenFoxy

Brian Guiding Light Star Moderator - Writer Extraordinaire Posts: 93,796	Bared Fear Aug 18, 2018 12:19:56 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Brian on Aug 18, 2018 12:19:56 GMT -6 Thank you Foxy. One of my experimental inverse line writes.

QueenFoxy Administrator Warrior Queen Posts: 270,985	Bared Fear Aug 18, 2018 21:03:25 GMT -6 Brian likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by QueenFoxy on Aug 18, 2018 21:03:25 GMT -6 Didn't know what you call it. Only know I like it.

lostineternity99 Vesuvious Administrator & Official Castle Poet Posts: 133,609	Bared Fear Aug 19, 2018 7:52:18 GMT -6 Brian likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by lostineternity99 on Aug 19, 2018 7:52:18 GMT -6 This form intensifies the emotions, Brian. Powerful darkness!

Brian Guiding Light Star Moderator - Writer Extraordinaire Posts: 93,796	Bared Fear Aug 20, 2018 3:48:48 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Brian on Aug 20, 2018 3:48:48 GMT -6 Thank you Rick. I'm not sure this has an official name. I don't recall seeing a write like it, though I'm sure they exist. Maybe someone will see it and be able to shed some light. I have tried to research it without success.

Deleted Deleted Member Posts: 0	Bared Fear Oct 14, 2018 2:40:00 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Deleted on Oct 14, 2018 2:40:00 GMT -6 Maybe you've created your own!

QueenFoxy Administrator Warrior Queen Posts: 270,985	Bared Fear Oct 31, 2018 6:38:18 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by QueenFoxy on Oct 31, 2018 6:38:18 GMT -6 Sounds likely to me, Michael.

dpg3 Super Star PC Poet Posts: 2,908	Bared Fear Dec 4, 2021 20:21:44 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by dpg3 on Dec 4, 2021 20:21:44 GMT -6 I had to read it a few times, a lot of hurt in this one, hurt that we all at sometimes feel, well done poet!!

Sugarmuser Super Star Posts: 1,439 Country: Australia	Bared Fear Apr 1, 2023 3:56:46 GMT -6 via mobile Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Sugarmuser on Apr 1, 2023 3:56:46 GMT -6 I see you. Loneliness sucks
	SUGAR 💕

Catlady2710: Thanks Michael. They are calling them Argos for short, and this the second time they won the Grey Cup in the last 3 years. Nov 20, 2024 11:41:41 GMT -6

Catlady2710: Good morning

Last night, our football team - The Toronto Argonauts (I didn't even know we had a football team to my shame) won the Grey Cup! Nov 18, 2024 11:11:38 GMT -6

Catlady2710: Hi everyone - we got a message from Staples today saying that the laptop was ready for pick-up so we will go tomorrow morning to pick it up. Nov 11, 2024 11:44:57 GMT -6

Post by Brian on Aug 17, 2018 5:52:36 GMT -6

Post by QueenFoxy on Aug 17, 2018 15:03:00 GMT -6

Post by Brian on Aug 18, 2018 12:19:56 GMT -6

Post by QueenFoxy on Aug 18, 2018 21:03:25 GMT -6

Post by lostineternity99 on Aug 19, 2018 7:52:18 GMT -6

Post by Brian on Aug 20, 2018 3:48:48 GMT -6

Post by Deleted on Oct 14, 2018 2:40:00 GMT -6

Post by QueenFoxy on Oct 31, 2018 6:38:18 GMT -6

Post by dpg3 on Dec 4, 2021 20:21:44 GMT -6

Post by Sugarmuser on Apr 1, 2023 3:56:46 GMT -6

Shoutbox