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Post by Brian on Jul 30, 2018 4:08:36 GMT -6
She speaks to me in whispers this night, Under full haloed moon, Rustling leaves answer the wind, Burying my hushed responses to her, Still she smiles for she has heard me,
Taking my hand we float out the window, Into the meadow's spotlight, Every blade bows to her presence, While wondering who I am, For I am a stranger here,
Her midnight song soothes the fears, As it touches flower, grass and tree, We dance on air, Sweet notes have lifted us
We hover, A precious moment to be savoured, Shared looks of understanding, Of love, Of all things out of heart 'n' soul,
Clouds move in overhead to my dismay, Leaving only darkness, Still her song continues, Still we dance, 'til dawn's grey light, breaks the spell.
Brian Paul Sullivan © 2010
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Post by lostineternity99 on Jul 30, 2018 6:23:59 GMT -6
This is a beautifully romantic poetic nocturnal relationship
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Post by QueenFoxy on Jul 31, 2018 11:48:09 GMT -6
Very beautiful love story, Brian.
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Post by simpledip on Aug 2, 2018 6:26:53 GMT -6
We hover, A precious moment to be savoured, Shared looks of understanding, Of love, Of all things out of heart 'n' soul...
Love is a wondrous feeling. Bows deeply
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Post by QueenFoxy on Aug 2, 2018 6:50:55 GMT -6
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Post by Brian on Aug 2, 2018 22:42:59 GMT -6
This is a beautifully romantic poetic nocturnal relationship Thank you Rick. There is something about a quiet night that eases the way for these imaginative ventures.
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Post by Brian on Aug 2, 2018 22:43:27 GMT -6
Very beautiful love story, Brian. Thank you Foxy.
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Post by Brian on Aug 2, 2018 22:43:54 GMT -6
We hover, A precious moment to be savoured, Shared looks of understanding, Of love, Of all things out of heart 'n' soul... Love is a wondrous feeling. Bows deeply It is indeed. Thank you my friend.
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Post by goldenmyst on Aug 4, 2018 20:55:39 GMT -6
Brian this had mystical qualities of your story "Moon Beams." This sings of love and the night and all that encompasses. The magical scene you paint is hypnotizing.
John
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Post by Brian on Aug 9, 2018 0:52:49 GMT -6
Thank you John.
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Post by AquarianM on Aug 17, 2018 23:23:55 GMT -6
Brian, I have always loved "flying dreams" the best. Elegant and gorgeous.
Dan
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Post by Brian on Aug 18, 2018 12:21:51 GMT -6
Brian, I have always loved "flying dreams" the best. Elegant and gorgeous. Dan Thank you very much Dan.
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